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11/7/2006 c1 93Alena D'Etoiles
Pretty weird-I like it...0.0 Keep up the good work!
11/5/2006 c1 78Pocket full of lightbulbs
Perfect.
1/1/2006 c1 70elvenstorm
The titles so intriguing and this really is a lovely piece, especially the part about goggles and windows to the soul. Very original.
12/5/2004 c1 74LordK
Wonderful, wonderful. Sorry I haven't reviewed this before. My loss; your consciousness is very engaging. (I had to look on the summary to figure out how to spell that...) I like this poem, and I like the way your style of writing mimicked what you were feeling especially concerning the "you" person. I like starting out with You, and always returning there, and I like the seeming randomness and how it always comes back to the point. My favorite line was "I can't avoid what is real with mockery or sarcasm\Nor can I voice what is real". That's genius. Very well articulated as always, and thanks for the look into your mind in this poem.
11/3/2004 c1 Until Utah
Excellent poem. It was very genuine and well-written, and the content was quite relevant to my own life. Sometimes my past seems like a work of fiction, especially when I think about a certain person. You described that boomerang feeling in a wonderful way.
This was a great poem. It really made me think. ^_^
10/30/2004 c1 15Sure I'm Garbage
"A story. Something I wrote?" Hm... Struck a chord with me. I've often mused how I wish my life were like a story. With fantastical things happening to me at every turn. But the world isn't quite so kind. The world is so dull in comparison to that which resides in our imaginations, is it not? Anyway, fabulous piece of work. I can feel that you enjoyed writing this, because you were liberated while doing so. Yes, I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thank you for sharing yourself.

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