1/11/2006 c1 61JR Gringo
The future huh? Interesting topic and word choice. BTW, good decision changing the first line, "Unchangeable life" would sound too hopeless for the "happy-future-you-can't-wait-for" mood here.
The future huh? Interesting topic and word choice. BTW, good decision changing the first line, "Unchangeable life" would sound too hopeless for the "happy-future-you-can't-wait-for" mood here.
1/1/2005 c1 243Manuel Fajar
Roller-coaster slide,
Accelerations quite diverse,
Our life's universe. —m—
Roller-coaster slide,
Accelerations quite diverse,
Our life's universe. —m—
11/2/2004 c1 30Honey Nut Loop and m-j
That's quite scary because i wrote a haiku only the other day on that same theme. Couldn't get it to work in a way i liked though so i didn't post it.
That's a really great haiku.
That's quite scary because i wrote a haiku only the other day on that same theme. Couldn't get it to work in a way i liked though so i didn't post it.
That's a really great haiku.