for The Numbness11/2/2004 c1 
35Scarlet Azalea
Whoa. Dark. And not a bit morbid.
But well-written.
I like the way it's come out- the situation gradually gets clearer, but the description stops just short of being obvious.
Lots of potential here! Keep writing!
35Scarlet AzaleaWhoa. Dark. And not a bit morbid.
But well-written.
I like the way it's come out- the situation gradually gets clearer, but the description stops just short of being obvious.
Lots of potential here! Keep writing!