for Fairieotypical Stereotales5/7/2006 c1 
5Carnivorous Marshmallow
Mepp! Hiya person! This be "Da Mad Kitty of Stuff and EGCMs." Haven't been with you much have I? Ah well, we blame it on our incredibly short memory-span. Your story be a little bit too much dizzy-inducing. Me talk eenglish goodly, says ME. And lastly, Luvs ya, BYE!
5Carnivorous MarshmallowMepp! Hiya person! This be "Da Mad Kitty of Stuff and EGCMs." Haven't been with you much have I? Ah well, we blame it on our incredibly short memory-span. Your story be a little bit too much dizzy-inducing. Me talk eenglish goodly, says ME. And lastly, Luvs ya, BYE!
11/29/2005 c1 Islandbreeze
Sorry, too lazy to sign. Also, I think my comp. teacher might frown upon it. As he was frowning upon the unknown reason of my laughter!
This was hysterical…kind of like a play with the characters, and even without the description aspect, it was just so funny to read. The little scene changes with the names was good too! I promise I’ll be back later and finish reviewing…bells going to ring. But this is good!
Sorry, too lazy to sign. Also, I think my comp. teacher might frown upon it. As he was frowning upon the unknown reason of my laughter!
This was hysterical…kind of like a play with the characters, and even without the description aspect, it was just so funny to read. The little scene changes with the names was good too! I promise I’ll be back later and finish reviewing…bells going to ring. But this is good!
11/16/2005 c1 31Mya von Dor
oh, interesting! Amuzing, and highly enertaining! I just thought I'd let you know that I really liked the randomness :D
31Mya von Doroh, interesting! Amuzing, and highly enertaining! I just thought I'd let you know that I really liked the randomness :D
11/7/2004 c1 3Minnow
This is hilarious! Very original, even for fractured fairy tales. Keep it up, I want to read the rest! Is anyone ever going to perform this? Because I can totally picture it... The dialogue is wonderful. The only thing that MIGHT be wrong with it is there are so many characters its hard to keep them straight even in this first chapter, but thats not even that big of a deal!
3MinnowThis is hilarious! Very original, even for fractured fairy tales. Keep it up, I want to read the rest! Is anyone ever going to perform this? Because I can totally picture it... The dialogue is wonderful. The only thing that MIGHT be wrong with it is there are so many characters its hard to keep them straight even in this first chapter, but thats not even that big of a deal!
11/6/2004 c1 3Nathan Murray
Whoa . . . wackiness overload, hon. A lot of stuff was chuckle-worthy, but you need to strengthen the structure of the story. There are so many tangents that fly off the story and then get hit by buses that the reader's concentration is dulled and the story begins to feel like one big in-joke for those who could keep up. The humour of absurdity is not that every single line is absurd, it's that the situation is grave but the reaction is absurd. What you need is a straight man, or a straight woman. (No gay puns intended)
3Nathan MurrayWhoa . . . wackiness overload, hon. A lot of stuff was chuckle-worthy, but you need to strengthen the structure of the story. There are so many tangents that fly off the story and then get hit by buses that the reader's concentration is dulled and the story begins to feel like one big in-joke for those who could keep up. The humour of absurdity is not that every single line is absurd, it's that the situation is grave but the reaction is absurd. What you need is a straight man, or a straight woman. (No gay puns intended)
11/2/2004 c1 21Lauren DM Smith
Great story, it's hilarious! I love the Rusty, the Magic Mirror and Foofoo. I hope the next chapter is up soon!
21Lauren DM SmithGreat story, it's hilarious! I love the Rusty, the Magic Mirror and Foofoo. I hope the next chapter is up soon!