11/3/2004 c1 8Vermilion Shadows
Aww, I used to know that feeling. I just have to say be true to yourself, but now I sound like some shoe commercial.
Nicely written in comparison to two different sides of oneself. And also, hooray to young writers like us! There's that commercial again... creepy...
Sometimes a bit more punctuation couldn't hurt, but in this style it's fine.
Last comments... keep up the writing and never let anything stop you from achieving your goals... Why must I be a damn TV announcer?
/VermilionShadows