for Downward Spiral Rising6/26/2021 c22 Anon
Still coming back to check on the progress and hoping you’ll update soon please!
Still coming back to check on the progress and hoping you’ll update soon please!
3/3/2020 c22 
73AlysonSerenaStone
Great start! I wish you would have came back and finished it though. :)
73AlysonSerenaStoneGreat start! I wish you would have came back and finished it though. :)
1/19/2019 c22 Anon
This is one of my favourite stories - I used to read this about ten years ago when I was in high school and I still come back to see if you’ve updated. Still hoping you will some day or even get it published - would love to see what happens to Chloe and Connor! Please update
This is one of my favourite stories - I used to read this about ten years ago when I was in high school and I still come back to see if you’ve updated. Still hoping you will some day or even get it published - would love to see what happens to Chloe and Connor! Please update
12/3/2017 c22 TheUltimateBibliophile
Hi! I loved this story and I don't know if you'll ever return to it, but I just wanted to tell you how fantastic it is! I really look forward to reading more if you do update!
Hi! I loved this story and I don't know if you'll ever return to it, but I just wanted to tell you how fantastic it is! I really look forward to reading more if you do update!
2/6/2017 c22 2Jaceyyy
I literally screamed when I saw it was last updated in 2014. My flatmates hate me now. But love the story. Defo worth failing my degree over.
2JaceyyyI literally screamed when I saw it was last updated in 2014. My flatmates hate me now. But love the story. Defo worth failing my degree over.
12/29/2016 c22 2Ink Child
i have been following this story since the beginning. it's been over ten years. I realize that there is a lot of life that has happened since you first began writing it. reading it now I realize that i was a child when i began to read this and although i can see now aspects of my childhood in it i am also pleased that the writing is in fact incredibly entertaining and without being too overly complicated the emotions of each person seem to bleed through the words to me.
I appreciate that sometimes stories die. i also have had some that withered, to my extreme surprise though, I also noticed that some came back like sleeping beauty. never quite decaying, just freezing and waking as though time had never stopped for them.
i sincerely hope that this is what has happened here, and that this story is just resting, festering in your mind to end in completion somewhere along the way. i also sincerely hope that you share that with us.
inky
2Ink Childi have been following this story since the beginning. it's been over ten years. I realize that there is a lot of life that has happened since you first began writing it. reading it now I realize that i was a child when i began to read this and although i can see now aspects of my childhood in it i am also pleased that the writing is in fact incredibly entertaining and without being too overly complicated the emotions of each person seem to bleed through the words to me.
I appreciate that sometimes stories die. i also have had some that withered, to my extreme surprise though, I also noticed that some came back like sleeping beauty. never quite decaying, just freezing and waking as though time had never stopped for them.
i sincerely hope that this is what has happened here, and that this story is just resting, festering in your mind to end in completion somewhere along the way. i also sincerely hope that you share that with us.
inky
7/18/2015 c22 Hizuki
I'm a big Connor fan because sometimes he's just so sweet to Chloe (especially the glove incident) albeit they do get in their own fights hahaha. But something tells me with 4 more chapters left, Warren will get Chloe _ shame because I'm a fan of Marmalade Boy too lolol. Oh well. I'm still holding out that I'm wrong and Chloe x Connor will happen. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon :)
I'm a big Connor fan because sometimes he's just so sweet to Chloe (especially the glove incident) albeit they do get in their own fights hahaha. But something tells me with 4 more chapters left, Warren will get Chloe _ shame because I'm a fan of Marmalade Boy too lolol. Oh well. I'm still holding out that I'm wrong and Chloe x Connor will happen. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon :)
6/22/2015 c22 Indelible Ink
Hi there! I just found this story, and oh my god, it's been such an incredible ride! And I read your author's note, and I know it won't really help, but I'm sorry to hear about your mother! On your profile, you said you had about 25 chapters planned for the story, so that's only like 3 more, right? Please, please update and don't leave us hanging here! Please? I know things must be really hard for you and this is probably the least of your priorities, but if you have any spare time, and you read this review, then please try and see if you want to finish this off? There are only like 3 or 4 chapters, right? And I really love Connor (I've preferred Connor to Warren the whole time) but I get the feeling that Chloe will end up with Warren, which is ok too :) (Although I definitely prefer Connor) But hey, we can't all have what we want, and I don't mean to pressure you or anything, so don't feel like you have an obligation to finish off the story or something :) Everything you wrote so far is pretty amazing!
Hi there! I just found this story, and oh my god, it's been such an incredible ride! And I read your author's note, and I know it won't really help, but I'm sorry to hear about your mother! On your profile, you said you had about 25 chapters planned for the story, so that's only like 3 more, right? Please, please update and don't leave us hanging here! Please? I know things must be really hard for you and this is probably the least of your priorities, but if you have any spare time, and you read this review, then please try and see if you want to finish this off? There are only like 3 or 4 chapters, right? And I really love Connor (I've preferred Connor to Warren the whole time) but I get the feeling that Chloe will end up with Warren, which is ok too :) (Although I definitely prefer Connor) But hey, we can't all have what we want, and I don't mean to pressure you or anything, so don't feel like you have an obligation to finish off the story or something :) Everything you wrote so far is pretty amazing!
2/25/2015 c22 guest
i hate good stories dt dnt hv endings, did u jump off d face of d earth? hw cum u need 10yrs 2 write a story ? LOOSER!
i hate good stories dt dnt hv endings, did u jump off d face of d earth? hw cum u need 10yrs 2 write a story ? LOOSER!
2/17/2015 c22 bluecupcakes
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11/29/2014 c20 Guest
Hiii... Please update! I read everything in a day. _ . Love it
Hiii... Please update! I read everything in a day. _ . Love it