for Downward Spiral Rising6/7/2009 c19 
1Demeterr
O wow this is good. Stupid fictionpress kept failing me though whilst I tried to view the next chapters . I look forward to the next chapters ^^
1DemeterrO wow this is good. Stupid fictionpress kept failing me though whilst I tried to view the next chapters . I look forward to the next chapters ^^
6/6/2009 c12 bubublacz
I was about to be reeled in to the Connor's camp for Chloe, when I hanged on firmly to the Warren's camp! LOL!
I was about to be reeled in to the Connor's camp for Chloe, when I hanged on firmly to the Warren's camp! LOL!
6/5/2009 c8 bubublacz
I seem to be tilting to Warren's side at the moment, since the two of sound really good. But I've always been a fan of girl-ending-up-with-playboy-guy...
I seem to be tilting to Warren's side at the moment, since the two of sound really good. But I've always been a fan of girl-ending-up-with-playboy-guy...
6/5/2009 c5 bubublacz
Hm... I'm thinking that by the end of this story Chloe would end up with Conner, but Warren looks so good with her now.
Hm... I'm thinking that by the end of this story Chloe would end up with Conner, but Warren looks so good with her now.
6/5/2009 c2 bubublacz
Ian is weird. I had a hard time understanding the relationships with Caitlyn. I had to resort in using my hands and making weird movements with it. Get it now, but still a bit confused. *laughing good-naturedly*
Ian is weird. I had a hard time understanding the relationships with Caitlyn. I had to resort in using my hands and making weird movements with it. Get it now, but still a bit confused. *laughing good-naturedly*
6/5/2009 c1 bubublacz
This looks good which is the reason that I'll be hanging around in your profile for quite a while... hehehe...
This looks good which is the reason that I'll be hanging around in your profile for quite a while... hehehe...
5/17/2009 c1 marianne
hey! I just read about why you haven´t updated it, so first of all I just want to thank you for the story, for sharing it it is amazing, and really hope you can finish it and update it soon, I know that it is difficult for you since it reminds you of some really bad things so if it is just too hard for you to keep writting I totally understand.
Secondly, I really hope your mother is doing well, and send you my best wishes for a complete recovery, I´ll pray for her and hope you are doing well.
hey! I just read about why you haven´t updated it, so first of all I just want to thank you for the story, for sharing it it is amazing, and really hope you can finish it and update it soon, I know that it is difficult for you since it reminds you of some really bad things so if it is just too hard for you to keep writting I totally understand.
Secondly, I really hope your mother is doing well, and send you my best wishes for a complete recovery, I´ll pray for her and hope you are doing well.
5/16/2009 c19 marianne
PLEASEE update the story dying to read more!Hopefully you haven´t forgotten the story! it is amazing!
PLEASEE update the story dying to read more!Hopefully you haven´t forgotten the story! it is amazing!
5/16/2009 c19 11Sakiru Yume
Um, great story. BUT YOU HAVEN'T POSTED SINCE 2006! Ah!
You need to post more. I really liked this story. Actually, I don't even know if you still even look at fictionpress, but if you do, I really, really want you to write and post more. I mean, if it's not too much trouble.
11Sakiru YumeUm, great story. BUT YOU HAVEN'T POSTED SINCE 2006! Ah!
You need to post more. I really liked this story. Actually, I don't even know if you still even look at fictionpress, but if you do, I really, really want you to write and post more. I mean, if it's not too much trouble.
5/2/2009 c19 starlight-angel88
Wow! Amazing story! I really really want to know what happens next! Please keep writing the story, or else I'll be VERY unhappy! :D
Keep up the terrific work!
Aryelle
Wow! Amazing story! I really really want to know what happens next! Please keep writing the story, or else I'll be VERY unhappy! :D
Keep up the terrific work!
Aryelle
4/24/2009 c19 lildevil123
awesomeness! i luv it..did u hav 2 kill off warren? he was so sweet and all...bah...so do conner and chloe hook up? NO too stepbro-stepsis thing! mebbe RYAN hes cute...not ian, hes too blah over sweet. i liked the title of ur story confusing.
ur portrayal of the characters was good. but uh as u mentioned nikki is supposed to be obsessed with warren, but it doesnt really show. mebbe if u rewrite this u could do something to it. and one thing, u sed that she doesnt have any more friends...what happned to ian?
uh and u hav a lil grammar prob...can u do sumting abt it? other than that ur writing is awesome!
kayy, keep it real! write more!
from a crazy fan
the lil deVil
awesomeness! i luv it..did u hav 2 kill off warren? he was so sweet and all...bah...so do conner and chloe hook up? NO too stepbro-stepsis thing! mebbe RYAN hes cute...not ian, hes too blah over sweet. i liked the title of ur story confusing.
ur portrayal of the characters was good. but uh as u mentioned nikki is supposed to be obsessed with warren, but it doesnt really show. mebbe if u rewrite this u could do something to it. and one thing, u sed that she doesnt have any more friends...what happned to ian?
uh and u hav a lil grammar prob...can u do sumting abt it? other than that ur writing is awesome!
kayy, keep it real! write more!
from a crazy fan
the lil deVil
4/14/2009 c19 8Veronica Kimble
wow! this is an amzing story! are you ever going to update this again? because this is really good! and i love the fact that she's sort of attracted to 3 guys at the same time. more realistic that way. good job with your writing!
8Veronica Kimblewow! this is an amzing story! are you ever going to update this again? because this is really good! and i love the fact that she's sort of attracted to 3 guys at the same time. more realistic that way. good job with your writing!