
11/7/2004 c1
74LordK
Very, very good. I've always adored your styles of poetry, and you're putting this one to very good use in this poem. The blank verse is absolutely perfect for the type of poem, and the "deaf marchers" line was wonderful. I also like the last line, it sums up the thing wonderfully, as well as "Your love smacks of false idolatry", SO true! Great poem, sorry I haven't reviewed for so long; I've been fighting the FP server errors. Great poem!

Very, very good. I've always adored your styles of poetry, and you're putting this one to very good use in this poem. The blank verse is absolutely perfect for the type of poem, and the "deaf marchers" line was wonderful. I also like the last line, it sums up the thing wonderfully, as well as "Your love smacks of false idolatry", SO true! Great poem, sorry I haven't reviewed for so long; I've been fighting the FP server errors. Great poem!
11/3/2004 c1
17chocoholic
Wow! I like that very much. In particular the first two lines, because I think this year more than ever before the election seemed like some sort of holiday, and that's part of what those lines suggested to me. I watched it all, sad too say, even though I'm not American; and this poem pretty much summed up my feelings with a different spin on it. Very good.

Wow! I like that very much. In particular the first two lines, because I think this year more than ever before the election seemed like some sort of holiday, and that's part of what those lines suggested to me. I watched it all, sad too say, even though I'm not American; and this poem pretty much summed up my feelings with a different spin on it. Very good.
11/3/2004 c1
1k+Faithless Juliet
Intresting, I agree with some of what your saying here but not all of it, I still think that their is hope if we change our course now. Intresting point of view though. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.

Intresting, I agree with some of what your saying here but not all of it, I still think that their is hope if we change our course now. Intresting point of view though. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.