for Victory '048/9/2006 c1 You're Wrong
Are you JOKING? Bush is a monkey in a suit. It's his fault that hundreds of young men and women and getting blown to pieces over in a far away country for NO REASON. He's a piece of shit. Seriously. Everything is going on in the middle east and what is his first action? TO GO ON VACATION. That's just pathetic. We didn't elect him so that he could ignore the real problems and obsess over the wrong ones. No. We elected (or you, rather) him to fight for our brothers in Israel (MY BROTHERS ARE IN ISRAEL) but he can't even figure out when to shut off his mic. He's a piece of ass and you know it.
Are you JOKING? Bush is a monkey in a suit. It's his fault that hundreds of young men and women and getting blown to pieces over in a far away country for NO REASON. He's a piece of shit. Seriously. Everything is going on in the middle east and what is his first action? TO GO ON VACATION. That's just pathetic. We didn't elect him so that he could ignore the real problems and obsess over the wrong ones. No. We elected (or you, rather) him to fight for our brothers in Israel (MY BROTHERS ARE IN ISRAEL) but he can't even figure out when to shut off his mic. He's a piece of ass and you know it.
8/3/2005 c1 
50Arael the 15th
Bush was no prize either, daddy-o. The guy wasn't the brightest crayon in the box and let's not forget his closet homophobia that he keeps denying. Kerry WAS an ass for basing most of his campaign on bashing Bush and embellishing his military service to the Nth degree, but Bush is an imbecile for being so damn conservative-like. Also remember:
majority of people = stupid
voice of majority of people = stupid
The people's voice had spoken, and it chose poorly no matter who you are.
50Arael the 15thBush was no prize either, daddy-o. The guy wasn't the brightest crayon in the box and let's not forget his closet homophobia that he keeps denying. Kerry WAS an ass for basing most of his campaign on bashing Bush and embellishing his military service to the Nth degree, but Bush is an imbecile for being so damn conservative-like. Also remember:
majority of people = stupid
voice of majority of people = stupid
The people's voice had spoken, and it chose poorly no matter who you are.
7/21/2005 c1 104FunkyFlower
hey, thanx for the shitty review! this poem is totally foolish and it's cos of people like u that the world is going to ruins. dont u hav 1 shred of humanity inside u? who're u, telling me to go and take a writing class? this poem (dunno if i can even call it that) is more like nursery rhmye for little kids. im not gonna waste more of my time on ur stupidity. u really need to sort out ur priorities and as ur bang out of order, go rot in hell shitty reviewer and don't mess with me!
104FunkyFlowerhey, thanx for the shitty review! this poem is totally foolish and it's cos of people like u that the world is going to ruins. dont u hav 1 shred of humanity inside u? who're u, telling me to go and take a writing class? this poem (dunno if i can even call it that) is more like nursery rhmye for little kids. im not gonna waste more of my time on ur stupidity. u really need to sort out ur priorities and as ur bang out of order, go rot in hell shitty reviewer and don't mess with me!
6/5/2005 c1 21TheDuke'sLover
oh the infamous lymeric. those tend to be used in a more... easy going way and yet you ruin the idea of them through bringing politics into them. About flip-flopping: I'm sick of this!Not only is it a stupid term like bootylicious, but it makes no sense coming from a man who can hardly string a sentence together! And do not tell me that you actually bought that Kerry was the flip-flop! Kerry simply realized there was an error and realized and admitted his error! He was being HONEST! something the Bush administration is incapable of doing! I'd rather have an honest man who can correct his mistakes and admit them freely than one who makes costly mistakes and goes, "Duh... what?... WMDs!" and covers his ass with his daddy's money. Your writing was... annoying, uninformed, and monotinous and there's no need to gloat that half of America is as uninformed as you. Or if you absolutely MUST , at least don't ruin the lymeric!(here's your cue to say, "WMDs!")
21TheDuke'sLoveroh the infamous lymeric. those tend to be used in a more... easy going way and yet you ruin the idea of them through bringing politics into them. About flip-flopping: I'm sick of this!Not only is it a stupid term like bootylicious, but it makes no sense coming from a man who can hardly string a sentence together! And do not tell me that you actually bought that Kerry was the flip-flop! Kerry simply realized there was an error and realized and admitted his error! He was being HONEST! something the Bush administration is incapable of doing! I'd rather have an honest man who can correct his mistakes and admit them freely than one who makes costly mistakes and goes, "Duh... what?... WMDs!" and covers his ass with his daddy's money. Your writing was... annoying, uninformed, and monotinous and there's no need to gloat that half of America is as uninformed as you. Or if you absolutely MUST , at least don't ruin the lymeric!(here's your cue to say, "WMDs!")
5/25/2005 c1 Olivia
The poem started out very nicely for what you were trying to do (I think...). But your general talk of lies and truth is out of place and makes it seem like an angry repub grabbing at whatever last name-calling opportunity arises.
The poem started out very nicely for what you were trying to do (I think...). But your general talk of lies and truth is out of place and makes it seem like an angry repub grabbing at whatever last name-calling opportunity arises.
4/23/2005 c1 DEMOCRAT
*laughs at you because you're an idiot with fecal matter for brains* *goes off to worship Pagan gods* I hope Jesus knows about imperialistic intent and censorship of the media! *is cheerful*
*laughs at you because you're an idiot with fecal matter for brains* *goes off to worship Pagan gods* I hope Jesus knows about imperialistic intent and censorship of the media! *is cheerful*
4/15/2005 c1 12HummerLover48
I love it! i read a reveiw you had written and i was very relived to find another republican on the site! You poem is very creative in a way that totally tells the truth.Lyss
12HummerLover48I love it! i read a reveiw you had written and i was very relived to find another republican on the site! You poem is very creative in a way that totally tells the truth.Lyss
4/3/2005 c1 17TrueToMyself
Hey! So I'm NOT the only Republican left in America... Great job on this poem. Regarding only the words, as words, they flow well and the rhyming just adds something to it. (Even though flip-flop was pushing it... ^_^). Regarding the message, even better! I just don't understand how some people can like, much less support, Kerry. THIS is going on my favorites list.
Keep up the great work,
TTM
P.S. Mille grazie for the three reviews! I figured that eventually somebody would review everything to be on my list...*shrug* But, hey, you'll still be on there for putting me as one of your favorites. (If you don't like my stuff, don't add me, though...)
17TrueToMyselfHey! So I'm NOT the only Republican left in America... Great job on this poem. Regarding only the words, as words, they flow well and the rhyming just adds something to it. (Even though flip-flop was pushing it... ^_^). Regarding the message, even better! I just don't understand how some people can like, much less support, Kerry. THIS is going on my favorites list.
Keep up the great work,
TTM
P.S. Mille grazie for the three reviews! I figured that eventually somebody would review everything to be on my list...*shrug* But, hey, you'll still be on there for putting me as one of your favorites. (If you don't like my stuff, don't add me, though...)
3/7/2005 c1 this revolution
Bush is an intolerant arse who cannot rule for shit. Because of supporters like you, the world will come to an end (but before that, America will have an incompetent dictator who will limit freedom... but he's already done that already.)
Bush is an intolerant arse who cannot rule for shit. Because of supporters like you, the world will come to an end (but before that, America will have an incompetent dictator who will limit freedom... but he's already done that already.)
3/7/2005 c1 3Felix Retif
Okay... where to start. Firstly I'll ask when you started being so gullible? Was it whilst watching Fox, or some other biased crap? I could read an edition of the People's Daily and find more truth than half of the American media. I don't know why on Earth you got so confused as to suggest that Bush spoke truth? Bush speaks nothing of the sort. Weapons of Mass Destruction. Weapons of Mass Disappearance. "America has spoken, the truth has awoken?" More like an easily deceived mass of politically and economically unqualified, disinterested individuals have cast a vote for the man who had the best TV advertising campaign. You fool - why on Earth do you believe the crap the Republicans spew forth? And yes, it is true the Democrats are incompetent - but what can you expect from a political system that advocates mediocrity? Mediocrity, that's what. I suppose the world can sit back and watch as another four years of Americans being killed by Iraqis goes by. Of course there is also the issue of Iraqis being killed by Iraqis... and in 2003 we saw Brits being killed by drugged-up American pilots. And so many others have died. Died in a mindless neocon crusade for the next election. You and your kind glorify the pointless killing in Iraq and elsewhere. Iraq isn't liberated - Iraq is just in transit between a Sunni dictator and a Shi'ite one. Congratualations to all the conservatives who helped create a second Iran. I salute you!
3Felix RetifOkay... where to start. Firstly I'll ask when you started being so gullible? Was it whilst watching Fox, or some other biased crap? I could read an edition of the People's Daily and find more truth than half of the American media. I don't know why on Earth you got so confused as to suggest that Bush spoke truth? Bush speaks nothing of the sort. Weapons of Mass Destruction. Weapons of Mass Disappearance. "America has spoken, the truth has awoken?" More like an easily deceived mass of politically and economically unqualified, disinterested individuals have cast a vote for the man who had the best TV advertising campaign. You fool - why on Earth do you believe the crap the Republicans spew forth? And yes, it is true the Democrats are incompetent - but what can you expect from a political system that advocates mediocrity? Mediocrity, that's what. I suppose the world can sit back and watch as another four years of Americans being killed by Iraqis goes by. Of course there is also the issue of Iraqis being killed by Iraqis... and in 2003 we saw Brits being killed by drugged-up American pilots. And so many others have died. Died in a mindless neocon crusade for the next election. You and your kind glorify the pointless killing in Iraq and elsewhere. Iraq isn't liberated - Iraq is just in transit between a Sunni dictator and a Shi'ite one. Congratualations to all the conservatives who helped create a second Iran. I salute you!
2/10/2005 c1 EternalSummer again
heh. I just got your review and realized that you had already read the poem I had recommended. I'm smart. Sorry.
heh. I just got your review and realized that you had already read the poem I had recommended. I'm smart. Sorry.