for Wonderwall3/8/2008 c25 
2SkyFallOuch
Hm I'm definitely a person that's slow. Slow as in reading stories that were finished centuries ago...I'm such a turtle -.-
Anyways, I love the story! Awesome character! Great development in the plot! Do I have to say anymore? Because literally, I found this story brilliant.
Enough said.
2SkyFallOuchHm I'm definitely a person that's slow. Slow as in reading stories that were finished centuries ago...I'm such a turtle -.-
Anyways, I love the story! Awesome character! Great development in the plot! Do I have to say anymore? Because literally, I found this story brilliant.
Enough said.
2/7/2008 c8 2lazy2signin
*blinks*
Damn.
*blinks*
Damn.
2/2/2008 c25 Anna
Your story was great and I really enjoyed reading it. It had all the aspects I love - like a boarding school and bad boys :P
Is it wrong of me to like Koda the most? I feel kinda weird about it, but I can't help it! You wrote him so well and I can really understand his feeling... Okay, there's the attempted rape part. Not so cool, Koda. But anyway I still kept hoping that Jamie and him would start something - Not that I don't like Brian! It's just there's also Koda... Guess I just have something for best friends or something :P
Your story was great and I really enjoyed reading it. It had all the aspects I love - like a boarding school and bad boys :P
Is it wrong of me to like Koda the most? I feel kinda weird about it, but I can't help it! You wrote him so well and I can really understand his feeling... Okay, there's the attempted rape part. Not so cool, Koda. But anyway I still kept hoping that Jamie and him would start something - Not that I don't like Brian! It's just there's also Koda... Guess I just have something for best friends or something :P
2/1/2008 c25 Mochii
I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED IT. How come I get addicted to every story you freaking make. You MUST continue your other storied. Please don't be an author who abandons work. It's. unforgivable.
I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED IT. How come I get addicted to every story you freaking make. You MUST continue your other storied. Please don't be an author who abandons work. It's. unforgivable.
1/19/2008 c25 1XxAmericanxBeautyxX
I loved the story, it was rather interesting and great to read. Koda is so evil! God, I hate him. But I do love Jamie even if he was arrogant, heartless and I love Brian even if he was an idiot for falling for someone like Jamie. :)
1XxAmericanxBeautyxXI loved the story, it was rather interesting and great to read. Koda is so evil! God, I hate him. But I do love Jamie even if he was arrogant, heartless and I love Brian even if he was an idiot for falling for someone like Jamie. :)
1/13/2008 c12 4MacKitty
well, i'll be goddamned. I don't know how you do it; make everything so realistic and addicting. all i can say is, bottle up that ability and sell it to writers everywhere because you'd make a fucking fortune off of it. :grins:
4MacKittywell, i'll be goddamned. I don't know how you do it; make everything so realistic and addicting. all i can say is, bottle up that ability and sell it to writers everywhere because you'd make a fucking fortune off of it. :grins:
1/6/2008 c25 72Iris Early
it's so lovely!
i just read it all through in one go and it's four in the morning now. but it was completely worth it because it's a lovely lovely sweet story and you can actually write in actual sentences with actual formatting, which is amazing, and your narrative is fluid and natural and. yeah, i really liked it.
iris x
72Iris Earlyit's so lovely!
i just read it all through in one go and it's four in the morning now. but it was completely worth it because it's a lovely lovely sweet story and you can actually write in actual sentences with actual formatting, which is amazing, and your narrative is fluid and natural and. yeah, i really liked it.
iris x
12/27/2007 c25 2FireOfJuly
read the story all the way through in three days. it was that good. needs some revision in some parts, as u mentioned, but LOVED theoverall concept of your work. A+! or... TWO THUMBS UP!
2FireOfJulyread the story all the way through in three days. it was that good. needs some revision in some parts, as u mentioned, but LOVED theoverall concept of your work. A+! or... TWO THUMBS UP!
12/15/2007 c25 1SharkieBite
WOW! Just wow! That was amazing. You write some pretty good slash darlin'.
I noticed you like the word "arse". For some reason that work makes me crack up.
By the way, where did this story take place? I think you metiond it no being in America. So Australia and England are the only other places I know of that mostly speak english. If it's Australia, I will be extreamly jealous because I have always dreamed of living there and if I hear there are hot gay guys in bording schools there, I'll have to find a way to get there immediately.
1SharkieBiteWOW! Just wow! That was amazing. You write some pretty good slash darlin'.
I noticed you like the word "arse". For some reason that work makes me crack up.
By the way, where did this story take place? I think you metiond it no being in America. So Australia and England are the only other places I know of that mostly speak english. If it's Australia, I will be extreamly jealous because I have always dreamed of living there and if I hear there are hot gay guys in bording schools there, I'll have to find a way to get there immediately.
12/1/2007 c25 11FluffVampyre
That was so amazing! I just finished reading it and I got like really excited and then disappointed, then excited again...! I was really pleased by reading this. You did a very good job! ^^
11FluffVampyreThat was so amazing! I just finished reading it and I got like really excited and then disappointed, then excited again...! I was really pleased by reading this. You did a very good job! ^^
10/28/2007 c25 6A.K.A. Writer's Block
:] you're kind of really amazing and i'm madly in love with your stories and stuff.
well, i like stupid post-it notes better, but that was written more recently so... it doesn't mattr. i'm babbling.
i love your stuff.
6A.K.A. Writer's Block:] you're kind of really amazing and i'm madly in love with your stories and stuff.
well, i like stupid post-it notes better, but that was written more recently so... it doesn't mattr. i'm babbling.
i love your stuff.
10/21/2007 c15 Sangre Azul
Ah, I loved this story so completely and utterly that I read it all in one night. And even though I thought the ending could use a bit of work I still thought it was great. Jamie was such a believable character and so were Bree and Kate.
Ah, I loved this story so completely and utterly that I read it all in one night. And even though I thought the ending could use a bit of work I still thought it was great. Jamie was such a believable character and so were Bree and Kate.
9/17/2007 c25 1vampyricangel
This review is about the story as a whole, not just Chapter 25.
I first want to start out by saying that I loved the story. Of course, I have always been a sucker for a good slash story. I realize that you borrowed a few of the characters, but I must say that you did a nice job with creating your own characters.
My only concern is that there are a few loose ends which should have been tied up. We never find out what happens with Bree. It seems a little sad that she is without someone. Oh, did I forget to mention, I'm a hopeless romantic. I can't help but enjoy the romantic aspect of a story.
It might be nice if you created an epilogue for the story. I realize that so much time has passed since you have finished it, but I think an epilogue would let the reader know what happens in the future. I personally am dying to know what happens with these characters.
My only regret is that I only just found your page. I have been reading stories on FictionPress for a while, and am surprised that I just recently found you.
I am wondering if you could recommend any other stories or authors.
Thanks for writing such a great sotry!
~The Vampyric Angel
1vampyricangelThis review is about the story as a whole, not just Chapter 25.
I first want to start out by saying that I loved the story. Of course, I have always been a sucker for a good slash story. I realize that you borrowed a few of the characters, but I must say that you did a nice job with creating your own characters.
My only concern is that there are a few loose ends which should have been tied up. We never find out what happens with Bree. It seems a little sad that she is without someone. Oh, did I forget to mention, I'm a hopeless romantic. I can't help but enjoy the romantic aspect of a story.
It might be nice if you created an epilogue for the story. I realize that so much time has passed since you have finished it, but I think an epilogue would let the reader know what happens in the future. I personally am dying to know what happens with these characters.
My only regret is that I only just found your page. I have been reading stories on FictionPress for a while, and am surprised that I just recently found you.
I am wondering if you could recommend any other stories or authors.
Thanks for writing such a great sotry!
~The Vampyric Angel
8/29/2007 c25 XxTheDutchessxX
I've read this story in one day and I love it. It's one of the best slash I've read so far. I'm just happy that jamie and Brian came through. Love It!
I've read this story in one day and I love it. It's one of the best slash I've read so far. I'm just happy that jamie and Brian came through. Love It!