
8/18/2005 c15 Maa Beth
*sniff* Your writing puts my own half-hearted attempts to shame. *sniff* It's just ... so good! Please update, please?
*sniff* Your writing puts my own half-hearted attempts to shame. *sniff* It's just ... so good! Please update, please?
8/11/2005 c15
14FireBringer
Very nice. I don't usually read period stories, but this caught my attention, and i'm glad it did! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Very nice. I don't usually read period stories, but this caught my attention, and i'm glad it did! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
8/11/2005 c15
1Loralak
aahh yes.. the Pangs of Love. I wouldn't put it better myself :P But don't worry, your writing was excellent yet again. It humored me to no end. G'job, mate!

aahh yes.. the Pangs of Love. I wouldn't put it better myself :P But don't worry, your writing was excellent yet again. It humored me to no end. G'job, mate!
8/6/2005 c15
3A.K. Eighth
Oh my. I am dreadfully sorry that it has taken me so long to review these two wonderful chapters.I really liked how you introduced the two new characters. It was very smoothly done, if that makes sense. You didn't just shove them in there, and you gave us enough information about their backgrounds so that your readers can relate to them. I thought it was cool that I could picture everyhing so clearly in my head. This is probably because their conversations were well written and realistic. Bravo. When you mentioned the Gazette it made me want to read Mairelon the Magician... haha. Well I enjoyed this new turn, but I'm looking forward to see what Winbourne and Cassandra have to say. Imagine that. Well sorry again, and keep updating. It's all splendid. -A.K. Eighth

Oh my. I am dreadfully sorry that it has taken me so long to review these two wonderful chapters.I really liked how you introduced the two new characters. It was very smoothly done, if that makes sense. You didn't just shove them in there, and you gave us enough information about their backgrounds so that your readers can relate to them. I thought it was cool that I could picture everyhing so clearly in my head. This is probably because their conversations were well written and realistic. Bravo. When you mentioned the Gazette it made me want to read Mairelon the Magician... haha. Well I enjoyed this new turn, but I'm looking forward to see what Winbourne and Cassandra have to say. Imagine that. Well sorry again, and keep updating. It's all splendid. -A.K. Eighth
8/4/2005 c15 amaryllis
Gorgeous, lyrical writing, seems very historically accurate, and the sexual tension between the main two characters is wonderful. I would love to read more!
Gorgeous, lyrical writing, seems very historically accurate, and the sexual tension between the main two characters is wonderful. I would love to read more!
8/3/2005 c15 Happy4
i just found this story, I wish that I would have found this earlier! This story is simply amazing, keep up the good work.
i just found this story, I wish that I would have found this earlier! This story is simply amazing, keep up the good work.
8/2/2005 c15 Maestra
A girl after mine own heart! (sniff...sob) Austen reborn! I'm speechless as I wallow in the glory of fine writing.
A girl after mine own heart! (sniff...sob) Austen reborn! I'm speechless as I wallow in the glory of fine writing.
8/2/2005 c15 Lola
What can I say? This is an awesome story, and I just love it! I hope to see Cassandra and Winborne in the next chapter... : )
What can I say? This is an awesome story, and I just love it! I hope to see Cassandra and Winborne in the next chapter... : )
8/2/2005 c15 candyrocks
One of the awesomest, bestest stories I've read in a while! And I've read thousands, by now! Keep up the good work! I want to see what happens to Cassandra and Winborne!
One of the awesomest, bestest stories I've read in a while! And I've read thousands, by now! Keep up the good work! I want to see what happens to Cassandra and Winborne!
8/2/2005 c12 l'ilmissnitpick
well, i have to say i'm impressed. not to mention, i LOVE othello. in fact, your list of favorite books could be easily transferred to my bookshelf. in keeping, i recommend you read Crown Duel by Sherwood Smith. it is my favorite book-i like it even more than the blue sword, which i absolutely adore!
well, i have to say i'm impressed. not to mention, i LOVE othello. in fact, your list of favorite books could be easily transferred to my bookshelf. in keeping, i recommend you read Crown Duel by Sherwood Smith. it is my favorite book-i like it even more than the blue sword, which i absolutely adore!
8/1/2005 c15 james Lee
it's a grand story! Update soon!
it's a grand story! Update soon!
8/1/2005 c15 Luthien
Wonderful chapter as usual! I'm in love with your story! Keep up the work and ta, darling!
Wonderful chapter as usual! I'm in love with your story! Keep up the work and ta, darling!
7/31/2005 c15 Malika
Wonderful job, as always. Lovely writing, lovely foreshadowing. I'd love to see all the main characters meet up soon! Who is Eliza in love with?
Wonderful job, as always. Lovely writing, lovely foreshadowing. I'd love to see all the main characters meet up soon! Who is Eliza in love with?
7/31/2005 c15 cOMatOSed
FANTABULOUS chapter! Quite an angsty bit, isn't this? Curious to find out who Eliza's languishing over! *winks* More soon, please!
FANTABULOUS chapter! Quite an angsty bit, isn't this? Curious to find out who Eliza's languishing over! *winks* More soon, please!
7/31/2005 c15 squiggles
Yay! Great chap! ; )
Yay! Great chap! ; )