for Blood Cup11/23/2004 c1 
8Forlorn Hope4sanity
Whoa...I agree with the other reviewer. This IS almost psycho scary. You must have been REALLY mad! You're killing someone...while rhyming... it's...interesting. Still, a good poem.
8Forlorn Hope4sanityWhoa...I agree with the other reviewer. This IS almost psycho scary. You must have been REALLY mad! You're killing someone...while rhyming... it's...interesting. Still, a good poem.
11/15/2004 c1 slimkitty
This would make a good hard rock song. But you're a little too heavy on your hate for a teacher. This is kind of psycho creepy.
This would make a good hard rock song. But you're a little too heavy on your hate for a teacher. This is kind of psycho creepy.