for Hide11/28/2005 c1 
20sTrive
m... that was like eating a sugar cookie... delicieux! Needless to say, I luv it. It's kinda' like my own poem 'Taste the Rainbow'- you might like it. ^_^
20sTrivem... that was like eating a sugar cookie... delicieux! Needless to say, I luv it. It's kinda' like my own poem 'Taste the Rainbow'- you might like it. ^_^
12/3/2004 c1 79Groovy Angel
Excellent poem. I love your imagery, particularly in the first four lines of the poem with "smudged", "dried and irremovable", "fog" - very good use of description and I like then idea that even these factors cannot hide the reflection. You write this poem very well and capture the essence of growing up well. I know the feeling, it gets all too much at times. Nicely written, well done.
79Groovy AngelExcellent poem. I love your imagery, particularly in the first four lines of the poem with "smudged", "dried and irremovable", "fog" - very good use of description and I like then idea that even these factors cannot hide the reflection. You write this poem very well and capture the essence of growing up well. I know the feeling, it gets all too much at times. Nicely written, well done.