
12/4/2004 c3 nick-wordsmith
A charming ending. Nicely written and despite a few typos in this chapter, a good read.
-Stones decay, words lastNick
A charming ending. Nicely written and despite a few typos in this chapter, a good read.
-Stones decay, words lastNick
12/4/2004 c2 nick-wordsmith
O drama and tension with a hint of pyromania :D
-Stones decay, words lastNick
O drama and tension with a hint of pyromania :D
-Stones decay, words lastNick
12/4/2004 c1 nick-wordsmith
This is a promising first chapter. But... an Australian girl called Sheala- that made me smile. I've never met someone called that. Also if you're interested, generally we call our 'moms' 'mum'. Hope that helps ;)
-Stones decay, words lastNick
This is a promising first chapter. But... an Australian girl called Sheala- that made me smile. I've never met someone called that. Also if you're interested, generally we call our 'moms' 'mum'. Hope that helps ;)
-Stones decay, words lastNick