for Who I Am7/24/2005 c1 Marisa
Wonderful.
Wonderful.
4/2/2005 c1 ludicrous louie
...are you eternity? this ones like a riddle with no answer...i really had to think about that one. liked it alot.
...are you eternity? this ones like a riddle with no answer...i really had to think about that one. liked it alot.
1/7/2005 c1 
13Redmorning
I love the flow and repeating of the last three words. It gives the impression of an echo sorta thing ^_^
13RedmorningI love the flow and repeating of the last three words. It gives the impression of an echo sorta thing ^_^
12/20/2004 c1 29amazingblazes
Wow...this is really supertastic! The repetition of the last word in a line to the first in the next is really great. It really helps the poem flow. I'm really glad that this didn't turn out to be an angsty poem. That made me happy. So keep writing...you're doing great!
29amazingblazesWow...this is really supertastic! The repetition of the last word in a line to the first in the next is really great. It really helps the poem flow. I'm really glad that this didn't turn out to be an angsty poem. That made me happy. So keep writing...you're doing great!
11/11/2004 c1 Coni
heh i have a poem called "who am i" also... ^^
heh i have a poem called "who am i" also... ^^