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1/22/2005 c1 noreen
the last stanza... not enough impact? i dunno... i felt that it was... too soft. i just feel that way... maybe misinterpretation? ehheh... ^^
11/9/2004 c1 22ellosse
nice. hm..i wonder. is this related to the sarah we know?
anyway...i think i like the second stanza best. 'mute with sadness'. and the pleading smile with the eyes part.interesting.

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