for Diantha4/7/2005 c7 chibisailorlight
*tears* That was a sad story lyn. It was intresting to say the least. I thought it had very good twist, and needs more detail. Other than that it was very entertaining.
*tears* That was a sad story lyn. It was intresting to say the least. I thought it had very good twist, and needs more detail. Other than that it was very entertaining.
12/23/2004 c7 
2Anna.Page
and so i begin my reveiws on all, well er umm most of your stories! oh wow how sad. i am depressed by the ending, but life is like that sometimes. very nice. beautiful and chilling
2Anna.Pageand so i begin my reveiws on all, well er umm most of your stories! oh wow how sad. i am depressed by the ending, but life is like that sometimes. very nice. beautiful and chilling
12/18/2004 c7 11Southern Butterfly
YAY Lynn! I told you I was going to read all your stories and leave lots and lots of reviews... I don't have alot of time tonight so I don't know how many I'll get to, but I really wanna read them all, and I will get to all of them before Christmas... I like this story... its so sad, and then ending, at least to me was very unexpected... yayness, I loved it, and I love u! lol! LYLAS!Love Always... Chelsey {bet ya didn't know it was me... lol!}
11Southern ButterflyYAY Lynn! I told you I was going to read all your stories and leave lots and lots of reviews... I don't have alot of time tonight so I don't know how many I'll get to, but I really wanna read them all, and I will get to all of them before Christmas... I like this story... its so sad, and then ending, at least to me was very unexpected... yayness, I loved it, and I love u! lol! LYLAS!Love Always... Chelsey {bet ya didn't know it was me... lol!}
11/30/2004 c7 7Just a lone airmen
good story, but you need to add more details to the story to make it more interesting. i like twist and the way you detailed their deaths, but more details in the story are good too.
7Just a lone airmengood story, but you need to add more details to the story to make it more interesting. i like twist and the way you detailed their deaths, but more details in the story are good too.
11/16/2004 c1 6DragonFaeLynn
LOL! Thanks all for reading this story...I'm surprised that you all actually like it seeing as how I completely rushed through pretty much the entire thing...^_^ Thanks mucho!
~Peace
6DragonFaeLynnLOL! Thanks all for reading this story...I'm surprised that you all actually like it seeing as how I completely rushed through pretty much the entire thing...^_^ Thanks mucho!
~Peace
11/15/2004 c7 17Mysfit Chyld
Aw... Very good story though it is sad... *sniff Sniff* ok on to your next story! *clicks on other story while cursing the slowness of the computer*
17Mysfit ChyldAw... Very good story though it is sad... *sniff Sniff* ok on to your next story! *clicks on other story while cursing the slowness of the computer*
11/15/2004 c3 Mysfit Chyld
Uh Oh... Cedric is not going to be in a very happy mood when he finds them.. what shall happen?
Uh Oh... Cedric is not going to be in a very happy mood when he finds them.. what shall happen?
11/14/2004 c7 4Interbutts
=O Oh no! Not Diantha! ;-;! You're very good at this. What happens next? Is this the end?
4Interbutts=O Oh no! Not Diantha! ;-;! You're very good at this. What happens next? Is this the end?
11/11/2004 c7 7Play.Dead
*tears* Was that the end? That was amazing. You're an amazing writer.
Thank you for reviewing my story, it's fixed now. I appreciate your efforts very much.
I thought the content of this short story was simply superb, you're the best author I've ever read on here. Great job!
7Play.Dead*tears* Was that the end? That was amazing. You're an amazing writer.
Thank you for reviewing my story, it's fixed now. I appreciate your efforts very much.
I thought the content of this short story was simply superb, you're the best author I've ever read on here. Great job!
11/9/2004 c1 4Interbutts
Hey I like it. Keep on trying, okay, I love where the story is going. ^-^
-Anywien-
4InterbuttsHey I like it. Keep on trying, okay, I love where the story is going. ^-^
-Anywien-