for Bleak Scrawls2/17/2005 c1 
65MoriSenpai
I love the frankness of this poem. How easy it is to believe as a child, but lose faith as we grow older.
65MoriSenpaiI love the frankness of this poem. How easy it is to believe as a child, but lose faith as we grow older.
1/29/2005 c12 8Unknown Unnamed
I liked all of these poems. Especially "The Hunter." I have a fascination with vampires, I guess. Hm.
Anyway, cool poems. ^_^
8Unknown UnnamedI liked all of these poems. Especially "The Hunter." I have a fascination with vampires, I guess. Hm.
Anyway, cool poems. ^_^
1/24/2005 c12 59Unfairy
I am not quite sure what a fae is... But I like the transition of the poem in general.
59UnfairyI am not quite sure what a fae is... But I like the transition of the poem in general.
1/24/2005 c1 Unfairy
Accompaniment*
It is interesting how you wish to go back and believe. Of course it is human nature to see something that isn't there, but when you can't believe, you wish for a state of mind that can.
Accompaniment*
It is interesting how you wish to go back and believe. Of course it is human nature to see something that isn't there, but when you can't believe, you wish for a state of mind that can.
1/16/2005 c1 51Keith Andrew
Thats really good. it has a sort of haunting air to it especially in the last few lines they just seem trail off into whispers. very good-Keith Andrew
51Keith AndrewThats really good. it has a sort of haunting air to it especially in the last few lines they just seem trail off into whispers. very good-Keith Andrew
1/14/2005 c12 32eldrin
Lovely... I adore your vampire themes, you do such beautiful work here. In 'The Wolf' you use two verbs as nouns - "For it will not listen to pleads or begs" - one cannot listen to 'pleads' or 'begs', these are actions, not objects, ideas, ect., try using plea, or other such word. Other than that, this poem was one of my favorites. ^_^ Keep writing!
32eldrinLovely... I adore your vampire themes, you do such beautiful work here. In 'The Wolf' you use two verbs as nouns - "For it will not listen to pleads or begs" - one cannot listen to 'pleads' or 'begs', these are actions, not objects, ideas, ect., try using plea, or other such word. Other than that, this poem was one of my favorites. ^_^ Keep writing!
1/11/2005 c5 32eldrin
These are beautiful! And I must say, 'A Queens Death' reminded me of the Chronicles...I can certainly believe that the wonderful books have inspired you a little...but it also has an originality to it that is absolutely incredible! I promise to read more soon.
32eldrinThese are beautiful! And I must say, 'A Queens Death' reminded me of the Chronicles...I can certainly believe that the wonderful books have inspired you a little...but it also has an originality to it that is absolutely incredible! I promise to read more soon.
1/11/2005 c1 4Ravyn Darklighter
Again...superlastive. "Applause." I give you two thumbs up, lol. Hey, I hate to beg for reviews but it always inspires me to write when someone reviews my work... so if you have time can you take a look at one of my stories on here...thanks for your time.
4Ravyn DarklighterAgain...superlastive. "Applause." I give you two thumbs up, lol. Hey, I hate to beg for reviews but it always inspires me to write when someone reviews my work... so if you have time can you take a look at one of my stories on here...thanks for your time.
1/9/2005 c1 36shadowz-333
I really like this one! I read your intro... It must be so cool to live in Ireland. I'm Irish, and praying I can go to Dublin one day... KEEP IT UP!
36shadowz-333I really like this one! I read your intro... It must be so cool to live in Ireland. I'm Irish, and praying I can go to Dublin one day... KEEP IT UP!
1/9/2005 c1 38alligater20
this is great. i am so glad that you put this on paper, because no one has really ever stated something like this so well before. great job:)
38alligater20this is great. i am so glad that you put this on paper, because no one has really ever stated something like this so well before. great job:)
1/7/2005 c1 13Redmorning
This is a really touching poem as I'm questioning my own faith a bit lately, too. Keep up the good work, and thanks for adding me to your Fav Author list ^_^
13RedmorningThis is a really touching poem as I'm questioning my own faith a bit lately, too. Keep up the good work, and thanks for adding me to your Fav Author list ^_^
1/6/2005 c1 14Kitty-brdg
This poem is really gripping. I mean, I can completely understand where you are going with it. Children are dreamers, and believe in so many things, but when you get old, you realize, that sometimes things aren't as real as you once hoped.
14Kitty-brdgThis poem is really gripping. I mean, I can completely understand where you are going with it. Children are dreamers, and believe in so many things, but when you get old, you realize, that sometimes things aren't as real as you once hoped.