for More Alike Than We Think12/15/2004 c1 XxblinkxX
this story is awesome. it's so...intricate...i love it!
i was worried that katie was going to try to cover up what she said or something, and i was just sorta chanting "oh shit" over and over again from the moment tessa had walked into the room.
BUT EVERYONE WAS HAPPY AGAIN! WHOO!
...dancers are amazing...all flexible and coordinated and shit. i can understand why she fell for her XD
...although that wasn't the only reason, obviously.
i LOVE the way you write! *waves a flag* yay
this story is awesome. it's so...intricate...i love it!
i was worried that katie was going to try to cover up what she said or something, and i was just sorta chanting "oh shit" over and over again from the moment tessa had walked into the room.
BUT EVERYONE WAS HAPPY AGAIN! WHOO!
...dancers are amazing...all flexible and coordinated and shit. i can understand why she fell for her XD
...although that wasn't the only reason, obviously.
i LOVE the way you write! *waves a flag* yay
11/11/2004 c1 Repair me
i didnt like it, i loved it ^_^ it was dam good, awsome short story, anyways it was good is what im trying to say, cya!
i didnt like it, i loved it ^_^ it was dam good, awsome short story, anyways it was good is what im trying to say, cya!
11/10/2004 c1 
4Knightmare Elite
While I enjoyed this story it's really cliched with the best friend scenerio. Not saying that's bed it's just very commong in girl/girl stories. Even more so that body girls constantly shared the near exact same thoughts. That took away a lot of depth to their individual characters. The ending as well just came to a half. A little more seperate emotional feelings from the girls would have strengthened the ending.
That standing this is still a good effort for your first romance. Keep at it and your next work will be even better. Don't take this an an insult or anything. I enjoyed the story it just have a few little problem and can be easily fixed.
4Knightmare EliteWhile I enjoyed this story it's really cliched with the best friend scenerio. Not saying that's bed it's just very commong in girl/girl stories. Even more so that body girls constantly shared the near exact same thoughts. That took away a lot of depth to their individual characters. The ending as well just came to a half. A little more seperate emotional feelings from the girls would have strengthened the ending.
That standing this is still a good effort for your first romance. Keep at it and your next work will be even better. Don't take this an an insult or anything. I enjoyed the story it just have a few little problem and can be easily fixed.