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8/9/2006 c1 Brandon The Anonymous
O! I like this alot. alot alot.Yes i do. Jackie jack jack is very poetic.Very nice very nice."When the glow is amber pale.Search for my forgotten soul,And let me once prevail."

I like those lines the best,Keep it up.:).
12/22/2004 c1 6Koala in Glasses
this was awesome. I really liked the tone of it and everything. Keep up the good work
11/10/2004 c1 49TiEka Koniku
very nice. the details and the rhyming was well done. vampires have always had a haze of misunderstanding. you seem to have lightened it a bit. that make sense? who knows. good job. *TI*
11/10/2004 c1 83silverquill212
Interesting. At first I thought the narrator was Satan. Then I realized your poem was under the category Romance and looked at it differently. I can see now how it would relate to two lovers, but think about it... If the first one went to hell and the other followed, they would not see each other. It's hell! Satan would not allow them to be together. But it's a sort of Romeo and Juliet kind of thing. I don't know.
Either way, it kinda freaks me out. o_O Excellent job.

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