for My Soul6/27/2005 c2 Nobody-n-Particular
The title was intriguing, sounded Greek. Nice haunting stillness to the last stanza.
The title was intriguing, sounded Greek. Nice haunting stillness to the last stanza.
6/24/2005 c6 
32eldrin
Two Sides: Touching and lovely, wonderful expression of both pain and lost love.
All of these contain a common brilliance and steady rhythms that I adore.
32eldrinTwo Sides: Touching and lovely, wonderful expression of both pain and lost love.
All of these contain a common brilliance and steady rhythms that I adore.
2/11/2005 c1 27lennonislove
That was wonderful! The rhyming scheme and repetetiveness are really good, and the imagery is beautiful! Great work.
27lennonisloveThat was wonderful! The rhyming scheme and repetetiveness are really good, and the imagery is beautiful! Great work.
2/2/2005 c4 213Siph Speigel
Pretty little poem.
Great use of analogies and well supported with discriptive adjectives.
A sweet truth to movement and mindset.
Events as freeflowing as the rhythme.
Good job.
213Siph SpeigelPretty little poem.
Great use of analogies and well supported with discriptive adjectives.
A sweet truth to movement and mindset.
Events as freeflowing as the rhythme.
Good job.
2/2/2005 c1 Siph Speigel
Hey hey, you reviewed From The Ground Up, so I figured I'd see what you were about.
I like this one alot, it's very simple and light. Relaxing.
Only thing I've noticed among things like this, is that words with "x" just never sound fitting.
But then I read all poetry as a sort of song, so it's different with me.
Over all, nice work with simple emotions in all their elegance.
Hey hey, you reviewed From The Ground Up, so I figured I'd see what you were about.
I like this one alot, it's very simple and light. Relaxing.
Only thing I've noticed among things like this, is that words with "x" just never sound fitting.
But then I read all poetry as a sort of song, so it's different with me.
Over all, nice work with simple emotions in all their elegance.
1/29/2005 c32 241Werewolf Nighteyes
Great poem. The emotion feels all too real. Keep up the good work!
241Werewolf NighteyesGreat poem. The emotion feels all too real. Keep up the good work!
1/24/2005 c31 59Unfairy
I like the resolution here, simply because it plays on the fact that without you, there is nothing to cheat on. I just find that entertaining.
59UnfairyI like the resolution here, simply because it plays on the fact that without you, there is nothing to cheat on. I just find that entertaining.
1/24/2005 c4 Unfairy
Haha, very nicely narrated and spread out... I could feel the intensity, but it wasn't clouded by my perverse mind. Nicely done.
Haha, very nicely narrated and spread out... I could feel the intensity, but it wasn't clouded by my perverse mind. Nicely done.
1/24/2005 c2 Unfairy
This one is interesting. You long for secrecy, but there seems to be no resolution as to why. It seems that the point of view here just wants something to cherish without other distractions.
This one is interesting. You long for secrecy, but there seems to be no resolution as to why. It seems that the point of view here just wants something to cherish without other distractions.
1/22/2005 c1 Dancinggal5389
VERY, very good. I mean it. Alot of stuff on fictionpress doesnt really flow but yours does. great job
VERY, very good. I mean it. Alot of stuff on fictionpress doesnt really flow but yours does. great job