for New Birth11/24/2004 c4 
1jeb315
wow taht is awesome u should consider adding to it that is just one that makes u think
1jeb315wow taht is awesome u should consider adding to it that is just one that makes u think
11/23/2004 c4 4under the influence
good start. you might want to slow the story down some and add some more detail, though. i like it though...keep writing :)
4under the influencegood start. you might want to slow the story down some and add some more detail, though. i like it though...keep writing :)