9/18/2007 c1 2LazyLibra
you have quite the talent, this story is beautifully written!

I can't figure out, however, if Aleron's world is ours in the padt, or if it's another world entirely...

Great Job!

Lee

1/13/2005 c1 6SirGwain
Great story... I had copied your story on a word filed and saved to read it on a latter date. I read it and forgot to review it. :)

Well, I loved it...I really liked the way you incorporated french words and that your title is french. I bet you must like Arthurian Legends huh? Maybe not... But anyway i loved it, it took me back to the times when i used to read arthurian legends. You're in my fav author list now! Are we going to get to see more of Aleron? Please update.

1/8/2005 c1 kayttea
Wow, this is really good. At first I thought it was sort of strange but I really really like it after I read the whole thing! It's very well written, good descriptions.

Also thanks for the reveiw on my poem. I know it didn't ryhme, and I'm not sure I entered it in poem form, I think i might have left it at story or something so it might have messed up... anyway, thanks, great story! *puts on fav. list* :-)

-Kashe

12/29/2004 c1 17kasaundra
i love it. you have alot of talent both in your poetry and stories. keep it up. i love the twists in this story and it is very true in regaurds to servitude an chivilary. keep it up!