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5/8/2007 c1 10DashedHope
thats sad...i get sad when i read about Jesus and his final moments...they were really sad...this is well written to capture his emotions before he was caught...he was fully devine but also fully human...so its fair to assume that he experienced fear and sorrow...i feel sad for him...even now after all this time...
2/6/2007 c1 The Intelligent Designer
This was awesome. I loved how you made Jesus so...real. I'm so against religion...but this poem made sense to me. It's all so...believable. This is amazing. Very good job!
1/18/2007 c1 24caralita
"Pregnant with my love for a world that cares not."

"It is time.

When I rise to call them,

They are asleep."

those two lines REALLY caught my eye.

i inferred the last line is about the imperfections of our human race, and how we are not always to be depended on.

this really put things into perspective for me,

and i think it's wonderful that you can write like this.

well done
1/4/2007 c1 5Cracked Pepper
Wow...

Very mysterious.

This is thoughtful writing which a lot of people can't do.

But you can!

:]
11/14/2004 c1 33c0nquestri0n
Creative work here.
11/12/2004 c1 8Kazza2085
Good poem
11/12/2004 c1 Luella
This is beautiful...really nice imagery. Contemplative...keep writing
11/11/2004 c1 989East-0f-Eden
I liked this. You did a really good job personifing Jesus.

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