for OLD POEMS6/11/2005 c1 
31A Perfect Circle
I was going through some of the reviews from people on my poems and came across you, figured I'd see if you'd written anything new. This peice is damn good. I love the flow and the story behind it, the rhyming is oh so choice. Keep writing.
31A Perfect CircleI was going through some of the reviews from people on my poems and came across you, figured I'd see if you'd written anything new. This peice is damn good. I love the flow and the story behind it, the rhyming is oh so choice. Keep writing.
1/14/2005 c1 2Avel
Definitely not a waste of time, sounds pretty nice though some parts of it don't seem like they quite fit in with each other, but since I'm not too big (read: knowledgable) on poetry. Nice poem though.~avel
2AvelDefinitely not a waste of time, sounds pretty nice though some parts of it don't seem like they quite fit in with each other, but since I'm not too big (read: knowledgable) on poetry. Nice poem though.~avel
12/13/2004 c1 jack meoff
yea it sucks dont ever write again do something useful with your life
yea it sucks dont ever write again do something useful with your life
11/16/2004 c1 catseyeview
I think you should keep writing...do drawings for your poetry, I think a Dante
I think you should keep writing...do drawings for your poetry, I think a Dante
11/14/2004 c1 11Earthsong12
Pretty! I like it! What are you talking about, Pont, it wasn't a waste of time and of course you should keep writing! Don't be silly. I haven't gotten a review from you in awhile, but it's ok if you don't review me. Although it would be nice...^_^ What i mean is, I read your stuff cause I like it, not cause I want reviews. Anyway, good poem, I like, more please!
11Earthsong12Pretty! I like it! What are you talking about, Pont, it wasn't a waste of time and of course you should keep writing! Don't be silly. I haven't gotten a review from you in awhile, but it's ok if you don't review me. Although it would be nice...^_^ What i mean is, I read your stuff cause I like it, not cause I want reviews. Anyway, good poem, I like, more please!
11/11/2004 c1 25gnitleinad
i liked this. it was really descriptive and captivating, in my opinion. by the way, it's pretty weird using the word 'twixt' in a modern poem...doesn't it sound a bit shakespearean? but anyhow, if it was your intention to use it, it probably does add to the flow of the poem. yup. great job!
25gnitleinadi liked this. it was really descriptive and captivating, in my opinion. by the way, it's pretty weird using the word 'twixt' in a modern poem...doesn't it sound a bit shakespearean? but anyhow, if it was your intention to use it, it probably does add to the flow of the poem. yup. great job!