Reviews: Boys | FictionPress

3/25/2005 c1

25wiltedrose15
So true! You know what? When I become preident..I'm going to issue a law that states that every boy must live undergorund...hhmm...yes, that is kinda mean but who cares?

2/5/2005 c1

123loz
Hey, this is a really good basis for a poem and i love the imagery of the heart.The rhyming of hands and strands it really emphasises the emotion in the poem.Reminds me of a poem i wrote called hey boy. It's true that guys do have control over us.Luvin ur work.loz