for Electric Fire3/20/2006 c1 
69til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton
I like. "The rose-crested hills warmed by fluttering wings and a whisper of the wind." I love that line.
69til-iburnout aka Amanda HeltonI like. "The rose-crested hills warmed by fluttering wings and a whisper of the wind." I love that line.
2/27/2006 c1 4kissxinxthexrain
I like it. Sensual, but also beautiful. Hope you check out some of my stuff too, cause this is good.
4kissxinxthexrainI like it. Sensual, but also beautiful. Hope you check out some of my stuff too, cause this is good.
1/6/2005 c1 36Oath
wow.. Beautiful use of symbolism. THe imagry was amazing! The title was more than appropriate ::does the i can't spell dance:: Very nicely done.
36Oathwow.. Beautiful use of symbolism. THe imagry was amazing! The title was more than appropriate ::does the i can't spell dance:: Very nicely done.
11/16/2004 c1 36Marilynagram
I like this. I like the imagery. Very nice. Pretty. Not sure what to say to critique. Gj.
36MarilynagramI like this. I like the imagery. Very nice. Pretty. Not sure what to say to critique. Gj.