for Message In a Bottle11/24/2004 c1 ImpySama
thats a really awesome rhyme sequence!me likes me likes
and its cool how u keep on going back to the sea thing, very ordered and prettiful
i am the twinny of a poetic master mind! (obviously one trait that we do not seem to share...lol)
thats a really awesome rhyme sequence!me likes me likes
and its cool how u keep on going back to the sea thing, very ordered and prettiful
i am the twinny of a poetic master mind! (obviously one trait that we do not seem to share...lol)
11/18/2004 c1 
612simpleplan13
I like the rhyming and the poem is awesome.. we all feel taht way when our hearts are broken but you used an awesome metaphor for it!
Thanks for your review!
612simpleplan13I like the rhyming and the poem is awesome.. we all feel taht way when our hearts are broken but you used an awesome metaphor for it!
Thanks for your review!