for 116 Sycamore Ave6/30/2007 c1 
7xTheRedAngelx
I actually thought this was quite good...pretty much gave me chills haha. but keep on going with the writing, you have lots of potential.
7xTheRedAngelxI actually thought this was quite good...pretty much gave me chills haha. but keep on going with the writing, you have lots of potential.
7/6/2006 c1 24InspirASIAN
I'm scared. I've read your profile and how you'd prefer help rather than flame or fluff, but after reading this I'd feel "out of position". Because this was incredible, and I don't have the knowledge and probably no right to give advice to such a talented writer like you.
A hauntingly -that sure helps the mood- yet beautifully piece of work.
24InspirASIANI'm scared. I've read your profile and how you'd prefer help rather than flame or fluff, but after reading this I'd feel "out of position". Because this was incredible, and I don't have the knowledge and probably no right to give advice to such a talented writer like you.
A hauntingly -that sure helps the mood- yet beautifully piece of work.
3/5/2006 c1 Jauvas
Don't lissin to theter i know him he being to nice too you it was boring and melodirmatic
HaVe A nICe Day~Jauvas}
Don't lissin to theter i know him he being to nice too you it was boring and melodirmatic
HaVe A nICe Day~Jauvas}
2/21/2006 c1 Theatre des Vampires
And, now, my review of the story.
Really good. Chilling, creepy. Better than your essays by far, you should do more horror.
Good day.
And, now, my review of the story.
Really good. Chilling, creepy. Better than your essays by far, you should do more horror.
Good day.
2/21/2006 c1 Theatre des Vampires
Sory, i didn't read this, but i will. I would like to apologize for previous insults. I was rather surprised at how you automatically assumed that i hate christians, i was born and raised christian, and i still attend church (though i'd rather not). it was not only you're review, but John Steins, that set me off. Between the whole swearing and "i'll bet your some stubby haired fat chick", which were both propbably on his review, i got very angry.
I would have focused more energy on him, except he'd turned out just being a little too weird to hate...
I guess i was tired when i read the reviews, and the two just kinda ran together.
Have a good day.
Sory, i didn't read this, but i will. I would like to apologize for previous insults. I was rather surprised at how you automatically assumed that i hate christians, i was born and raised christian, and i still attend church (though i'd rather not). it was not only you're review, but John Steins, that set me off. Between the whole swearing and "i'll bet your some stubby haired fat chick", which were both propbably on his review, i got very angry.
I would have focused more energy on him, except he'd turned out just being a little too weird to hate...
I guess i was tired when i read the reviews, and the two just kinda ran together.
Have a good day.
11/18/2004 c1 6Ozzy-Rox170890
Wow.
I don't normally read these kinds of stories, but the summary caught my eye. I'm glad it did. This is a really good story.
6Ozzy-Rox170890Wow.
I don't normally read these kinds of stories, but the summary caught my eye. I'm glad it did. This is a really good story.