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1/7/2005 c1 82Twilit Exaggerance
"instead i sit here melancholy and blue" is a great line. Well wrote! Thanx for the review for love.
12/7/2004 c1 Leena
A VERY TOUCHING POEM. IS THIS REALLY YOUR FIRST ATTEMPT?IF SO YOU MUST BE A GOOD POET.

Leena
12/7/2004 c1 star
this is such a cool poem!its so romatici wish i had written thiscool workc ya

*star*
12/1/2004 c1 ZAINAB
seerat ur poem is wicked man. since wen have u been a shahiri.(poet)u shud sing 'main shahir to nahin, magar hai haseen, jab se dekha, maine dujko mujko, shahiri agayee.' do u get it? ur not a poet, but wen u saw thingy u know who, u became a poet. lol!wicked poem man. zainab
12/1/2004 c1 LurveMachine
touching poem.has in depth meaning and can stretch your mind to think about what the poem meanshas a deeper meaning to what is actually writtenwickedlud it*Lurve~Machine*
11/30/2004 c1 ScReAm
wow! this is such a cool poem. its very romatic and definatly evokes an emotion.

its hard to believe that this is your firt poem.

wicked!

~ ScReAm ~
11/30/2004 c1 Relentless
yo!cool poem. wicked rhyming at the end of each sentence.very touching!

XrelentlessX
11/30/2004 c1 angel
i have read this so many times, but wat can i say it's to good.

i wounder who u was thinking of when wrting this poem. UM.LOL

IM VERY PROAD OF U SIS, KEEP THE TALENT UP. IN OTHER WORDS KEEP THE LOVE UP.

love u loadz Anna.

HAPPY.
11/26/2004 c1 FloWerPoWer
hey this is such a touching poemi really like thisif i had a crush i'd def give it themWell Done A very good poem
11/24/2004 c1 Ninja
Mashallah my friend what a beautiful poem, the eloquency... i really liked it- not too long neither too short - PERFECT!

Keep up the good work :-)

cu in college lol
11/22/2004 c1 Tina
wow!cool poem, love it so muchi can so totally relate to it. i have this boy i have a crush on and i just can't tell him that i really like him.wicked poem.this really touched me update some more stuff real soonwill be waiting
11/19/2004 c1 tibs
hi ishah the poem is so cool, and it lets off a very strong emotion and it really touches all those people out there who are in love.
11/19/2004 c1 2mez1
hey ishah, this is one of the best poems i've read. it really inspiring. i like the fact that it rhymes and actually make sense, not only to you but others as well.
11/19/2004 c1 myno
Not bad, for a first try. I'm not a fan of rhyming, but that's personal style and I won't mess with that. The allcaps YOU in the last 3 lines is kind of destracting though.

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