
1/30/2005 c1
54rainkisser
it was really really REAALLY GOOD! I loved the pleading and the lay out alot! you could play up the "if only you would just yell" a little more, I think that would add a lot if you worked some more on that. It was really great though "Little hints" I totally understand! REALLY great! much MUCH love -mia

it was really really REAALLY GOOD! I loved the pleading and the lay out alot! you could play up the "if only you would just yell" a little more, I think that would add a lot if you worked some more on that. It was really great though "Little hints" I totally understand! REALLY great! much MUCH love -mia