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5/14/2005 c1 82Linnet
I'm not sure how I haven't seen this one before! I love it, the metaphor is very nice, and I also admire your decision to take a year off school...travel as much as you can! I'm sure it'll be lovely.

"For we are never really freeUntil our hearts have lived out their dreams."

That's incredibly true, and a beautiful way to put it.

-Linnet
11/20/2004 c1 38BranwenEithne
Very beautiful. I ecspecially like the last two lines. But the entire piece succeeded in giving off an aura of freedom and joy with no boundaries.
11/20/2004 c1 79deepdown
wow... i know you were using a metapor, but if i take that kinda literally, then i know what youre on about... beautiful poem, really is... glad to hear youll be writing more, welcome back

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