for Wilted Innocence11/20/2004 c2 tasch
hey pam, how you doing.wow. to put it into one word, its really very good . im very impressed, your really good at writing,
hey pam, how you doing.wow. to put it into one word, its really very good . im very impressed, your really good at writing,
11/20/2004 c1 Aditi
Yeah..you told me to write a review, so here you go. It's good.. you need to elaborate on the story line. Your style of writing is just like mine... Even though the concept of having a fragment of an event is good, this one doesn't satisfy the readers' needs - it's not like it's keeping you on edge for the next submission of the other part, or anything... I'd like to read a full version of that. Now that, would be great.
Yeah..you told me to write a review, so here you go. It's good.. you need to elaborate on the story line. Your style of writing is just like mine... Even though the concept of having a fragment of an event is good, this one doesn't satisfy the readers' needs - it's not like it's keeping you on edge for the next submission of the other part, or anything... I'd like to read a full version of that. Now that, would be great.
11/20/2004 c3 margaux
nice story. There are kinda a lot of descriptions though and a lot of confusing names! :DI like it:D
nice story. There are kinda a lot of descriptions though and a lot of confusing names! :DI like it:D