1/19/2006 c8 Steve
Hello..I've been reading your stories over the past week (Stealing Madison, and now this one) and I must say, your very good with writing :) I'm sorry i didnt review on SM, I will need to go back and reread the story when im not at school, and not at my friends house for the whole week till my mom gets back from a work trip. lol but, very good stories, I like the difference from anger, to strange feelings, and then progressing from there :) its a nice alternation, know what I mean? lol, sorry if this is confusing, im in school writing this, and im quite tired still, but i will keep reading and reviewing, so no worries :) Good luck on your other stories. :D
Hello..I've been reading your stories over the past week (Stealing Madison, and now this one) and I must say, your very good with writing :) I'm sorry i didnt review on SM, I will need to go back and reread the story when im not at school, and not at my friends house for the whole week till my mom gets back from a work trip. lol but, very good stories, I like the difference from anger, to strange feelings, and then progressing from there :) its a nice alternation, know what I mean? lol, sorry if this is confusing, im in school writing this, and im quite tired still, but i will keep reading and reviewing, so no worries :) Good luck on your other stories. :D
10/20/2005 c5 21insane in the brain
Um...you should've wrote, I qiote you, instead of quite. I like your story, it's intriguing and makes me want to carry on reading.
Um...you should've wrote, I qiote you, instead of quite. I like your story, it's intriguing and makes me want to carry on reading.
10/16/2005 c1 j.m.burford
I have read this as you should know but I think that you should change the name of Chastised to Wiltered on the sories that are complete or in progress.
I have read this as you should know but I think that you should change the name of Chastised to Wiltered on the sories that are complete or in progress.
7/30/2005 c1 3nightmare of you
OMG, OMG, OMG. This story is awesome so far, i can't wait to read it all. :-)
OMG, OMG, OMG. This story is awesome so far, i can't wait to read it all. :-)
6/27/2005 c25 8BadSweets
Hey! Just finished reading. I think it was kind of simple in writing style, and a bit crazy. But it was a good ride. I can see potential in your writing, especially in the way you created the plot! I'll definitely be looking at your other stories.
Hey! Just finished reading. I think it was kind of simple in writing style, and a bit crazy. But it was a good ride. I can see potential in your writing, especially in the way you created the plot! I'll definitely be looking at your other stories.
6/17/2005 c25 1i-rite-gud
So... Ryann turned out to be a witch of a sort... She had an adorable little girl with Leston... and you rock out loud? Yes... that seems right :) That story was so cool! I loved it so much. Great job.
So... Ryann turned out to be a witch of a sort... She had an adorable little girl with Leston... and you rock out loud? Yes... that seems right :) That story was so cool! I loved it so much. Great job.
6/17/2005 c24 i-rite-gud
OHMYGAWD! THAT WAS THE CUTEST ENDING EVER! So... Hannah actually turned out to be a witch... Ryann was controlling the cold... and They got married! ^.^! You wrapped everything up perfectly!
OHMYGAWD! THAT WAS THE CUTEST ENDING EVER! So... Hannah actually turned out to be a witch... Ryann was controlling the cold... and They got married! ^.^! You wrapped everything up perfectly!