for One for Every moment12/14/2004 c1 
1AmyBabe
Wow that's really good. It makes you think a bit. It's a good job you didn't have anything better to do or you would never have written it and i think it's brill. Merry CHristmas,AmyBabe
1AmyBabeWow that's really good. It makes you think a bit. It's a good job you didn't have anything better to do or you would never have written it and i think it's brill. Merry CHristmas,AmyBabe
12/5/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
I really like it. The poem is very interesting. I like how you start out so poetic and romantic and such and then end it on the insulting side. It adds another dimension that isn't common, and I've never seen before in any of your other poems. Good job as always!
14arbysauce93I really like it. The poem is very interesting. I like how you start out so poetic and romantic and such and then end it on the insulting side. It adds another dimension that isn't common, and I've never seen before in any of your other poems. Good job as always!
11/26/2004 c1 81daphnegray78
Ooh, great poem! What an interesting concept. I especially like the last line...it was just *spectacular*!
On another 'lil note, sorry I haven't reviewed your other stories in awhile. I'm soo swamped right now. But I *promise* to catch up on my reviewing this Christmas break, after finals and everything are over.
Well, it's getting late...so I will talk to you later.
Have fun!
~Daphne~
81daphnegray78Ooh, great poem! What an interesting concept. I especially like the last line...it was just *spectacular*!
On another 'lil note, sorry I haven't reviewed your other stories in awhile. I'm soo swamped right now. But I *promise* to catch up on my reviewing this Christmas break, after finals and everything are over.
Well, it's getting late...so I will talk to you later.
Have fun!
~Daphne~
11/22/2004 c1 1Meg Schick
Good job. I really liked this poem. The end made me chuckle. Well done. ~Meg
1Meg SchickGood job. I really liked this poem. The end made me chuckle. Well done. ~Meg
11/22/2004 c1 17Faerie Energy
lol, Very nice. Can I borrow the, "If I had a rose for every moment I have loved another, the world would be my garden", for the short story I'm writing? It's not posted here, but if you want to see it it's your right if I can borrow that... :-D my email is . Great ending to the poem.
With all due respect,Ebony
17Faerie Energylol, Very nice. Can I borrow the, "If I had a rose for every moment I have loved another, the world would be my garden", for the short story I'm writing? It's not posted here, but if you want to see it it's your right if I can borrow that... :-D my email is . Great ending to the poem.
With all due respect,Ebony
11/21/2004 c1 Annie
OMG! This was a great good poem. Geesh, I wish I had thought of this myself. This is an awsome poem and I hope you continue to write more.
OMG! This was a great good poem. Geesh, I wish I had thought of this myself. This is an awsome poem and I hope you continue to write more.