for Myra's Gift1/6/2005 c1 
16Pico the Great
Very serious. v. good.
There were a couple grammar mistakes, but I'm sure a second reading will correct them. Good writing.
Kudos!
-PTG
16Pico the GreatVery serious. v. good.
There were a couple grammar mistakes, but I'm sure a second reading will correct them. Good writing.
Kudos!
-PTG
11/21/2004 c1 21Seremela Minyatur
this was a really good story. it is sad, but it has a good message. nice work.
21Seremela Minyaturthis was a really good story. it is sad, but it has a good message. nice work.