for Collection of Haikus8/22/2005 c3 David Stephen
This one doesn't have the basic principle of 5,7,5, however, an actual Haiku is so complex and this 5,7,5 sort of overview misses the point and fixes the Haiku in a mechanical way. So therefore this lovely Haiku is as correct as your others - but I feel this is one of your best. It is mysterious and is like a piece of a picture ... wow. ~DS~
This one doesn't have the basic principle of 5,7,5, however, an actual Haiku is so complex and this 5,7,5 sort of overview misses the point and fixes the Haiku in a mechanical way. So therefore this lovely Haiku is as correct as your others - but I feel this is one of your best. It is mysterious and is like a piece of a picture ... wow. ~DS~
8/22/2005 c2 David Stephen
This one was beautiful again but with added humour! You write nice Haikus - keep it up! ~DS~
This one was beautiful again but with added humour! You write nice Haikus - keep it up! ~DS~
8/22/2005 c1 David Stephen
I have always loved Haikus! This is so soft and calming - perfect reading before falling into a nice relaxed sleep. Hehe. Well done - a great pace and you didn't agonise over the wording. Keep at it! ~DS~
I have always loved Haikus! This is so soft and calming - perfect reading before falling into a nice relaxed sleep. Hehe. Well done - a great pace and you didn't agonise over the wording. Keep at it! ~DS~
1/20/2005 c3 Tazpon
I think you are confused as to what I haiku is, haikus have a sylable count of 5-7-5 not a word count.
I think you are confused as to what I haiku is, haikus have a sylable count of 5-7-5 not a word count.
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