
2/1/2014 c16 FlyingFran1
Thumbs up if you think this story is the best!
( Me! )
Thumbs up if you think this story is the best!
( Me! )
5/19/2013 c16 Amazing
That was just amazing! Good plot, great writing style. Wow.
That was just amazing! Good plot, great writing style. Wow.
6/22/2012 c16 Shlovesu
Nice, nice, nice! I loved it! Im glad its a happy end.
Nice, nice, nice! I loved it! Im glad its a happy end.
6/6/2012 c16 BlueKnicksnKnacks
I LOVED this story! It was truly amazing. Well-written, sweet, and had a perfect ending.
I'll always remember this story.
-Fent
I LOVED this story! It was truly amazing. Well-written, sweet, and had a perfect ending.
I'll always remember this story.
-Fent
6/5/2012 c8
5Don'tStopMeNow
I also forgot to mention that I literally shivered at the line, 'speak to that sweet face in reality, kiss it in his dreams.' It was just so poetic and beautiful.

I also forgot to mention that I literally shivered at the line, 'speak to that sweet face in reality, kiss it in his dreams.' It was just so poetic and beautiful.
6/5/2012 c1 Don'tStopMeNow
I loved everything about this story, I laughed quite a bit at many parts of this story. Like the statement, 'the primitive male within him cheered' I laughed so loudly I woke up the other members of my household haha.
It was adorable and just enough sweetness and not too cliche, made me extremely pleased. And I loved that it wasn't too long like those stories over one-hundred thousand words.
I loved everything about this story, I laughed quite a bit at many parts of this story. Like the statement, 'the primitive male within him cheered' I laughed so loudly I woke up the other members of my household haha.
It was adorable and just enough sweetness and not too cliche, made me extremely pleased. And I loved that it wasn't too long like those stories over one-hundred thousand words.
1/31/2012 c15 Skyless16
I can't even begin to tell you how amazingly beautiful this story is. The last scene was so lovely! I loved it. I just finished reading the whole thing and I'm still dumbstruck by how amazing it was. For lack of better words, YOU ARE AN AMAZING AND TALENTED WRITER. I'm gonna stop talking now. :) I loved it. :)
I can't even begin to tell you how amazingly beautiful this story is. The last scene was so lovely! I loved it. I just finished reading the whole thing and I'm still dumbstruck by how amazing it was. For lack of better words, YOU ARE AN AMAZING AND TALENTED WRITER. I'm gonna stop talking now. :) I loved it. :)
10/31/2011 c16
5ForeignMusicLyrics
Such a great and moving story! Chapter 15 is my favorite. U can't help but smile;)

Such a great and moving story! Chapter 15 is my favorite. U can't help but smile;)
4/16/2010 c16
7TunglMed
aw that was so sweet.. haha ;b yay! a perfect ending.
well done, that was great :L
med

aw that was so sweet.. haha ;b yay! a perfect ending.
well done, that was great :L
med
6/8/2009 c10 anonyx
This is retarded. She doesn't know what horses and seasons and sh*t like that are, but she goes to parties outside the house and there are freaking WINDOWS. That makes no sense and it's dumb as hell.
Also, you need to reread this entire *ing story and fix your misspellings and wrong synonyms. (You know, "to" and "too", "off" and "of" even. Seriously wtf.)
However, I guess it's a pretty cute story (except for the slave not knowing seasons or horses or sh*t like that). Seriously. Dumb.
This is retarded. She doesn't know what horses and seasons and sh*t like that are, but she goes to parties outside the house and there are freaking WINDOWS. That makes no sense and it's dumb as hell.
Also, you need to reread this entire *ing story and fix your misspellings and wrong synonyms. (You know, "to" and "too", "off" and "of" even. Seriously wtf.)
However, I guess it's a pretty cute story (except for the slave not knowing seasons or horses or sh*t like that). Seriously. Dumb.