for The Darkness1/6/2006 c1 
7midnightdream-5
wow. hm very interestin i like the fact that u can really engae in the feeling of the narrator, n their feelings. well done katie x
7midnightdream-5wow. hm very interestin i like the fact that u can really engae in the feeling of the narrator, n their feelings. well done katie x
2/16/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
Wow...creepy last line..suspensful poem which is definitely different then others I've read...interesting images and flows nicely..keep writing!
1o0oAnnieWow...creepy last line..suspensful poem which is definitely different then others I've read...interesting images and flows nicely..keep writing!
1/13/2005 c1 36Silentwriter9
I liked how you repeated the line: "Coming, gaining on me." through out the entire poem. It kept the pace of the hunt on... and i exspecially liked the last line (and whether or not you meant it to be that way) "Its here" off to the side instead of in the middle. It made me pay more attention to it. Nice Job
*Silent Writer*
36Silentwriter9I liked how you repeated the line: "Coming, gaining on me." through out the entire poem. It kept the pace of the hunt on... and i exspecially liked the last line (and whether or not you meant it to be that way) "Its here" off to the side instead of in the middle. It made me pay more attention to it. Nice Job
*Silent Writer*
12/20/2004 c1 j0zz
omg! i luv this poem! it tells so many stories all in one sentence. good work :)
omg! i luv this poem! it tells so many stories all in one sentence. good work :)
11/30/2004 c1 flyingstarofdoom2
This was a decent poem, a little dark for my tastes, but well written. you used a very good choice of words, and an interesting verse pattern. Good Job.
This was a decent poem, a little dark for my tastes, but well written. you used a very good choice of words, and an interesting verse pattern. Good Job.
11/22/2004 c1 11melodyofthetrees
Very dark, yet nice poem. I would watch your grammar a little, but other than that the poem is great! Keep writing!
11melodyofthetreesVery dark, yet nice poem. I would watch your grammar a little, but other than that the poem is great! Keep writing!
11/22/2004 c1 21Sublime Rhapsody
Very well detailed and I loved the mysterious flow to it. It was genuinly superb! Great work!
21Sublime RhapsodyVery well detailed and I loved the mysterious flow to it. It was genuinly superb! Great work!
11/22/2004 c1 dragongate
That's cool, for me, I can't write a happy poem so, this isn't really a change. I like your penname though.
That's cool, for me, I can't write a happy poem so, this isn't really a change. I like your penname though.