11/22/2004 c1 24she's not breathing
lovely, intense contrast - accused/casualty and imperfection/victim. there's a thin line between some aspects there, and it really made me stop and think when you took it like that and i had to really see just where it was different and what the significance was. awesome. and the entire idea, the flow - i loved it. VERY well done. do me a favour and check out something i've written?~k8

11/22/2004 c1 24My-BleedingPen98
good poem. very true. ~Julianne