for Float1/6/2005 c1 
62Sunflower dream
good job! you really should post the one on the tsunami that you showed me! i admire how you can use the short verses for so much impact! good job! (i already told you that) keep writing!
62Sunflower dreamgood job! you really should post the one on the tsunami that you showed me! i admire how you can use the short verses for so much impact! good job! (i already told you that) keep writing!
11/25/2004 c1 6Lamia Aduro
very moving, when you're feeling that love depression. my favourite line: " I know you heard me. I heard me too." no suggested improvements. good imagery. hmm its hard to be critical. post more poetry!
6Lamia Adurovery moving, when you're feeling that love depression. my favourite line: " I know you heard me. I heard me too." no suggested improvements. good imagery. hmm its hard to be critical. post more poetry!