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11/26/2004 c1 seventh-statistic
wow. wow, wow, wow. that's all i have to say... okay, i have more to say. what writer would i be if i didn't? that was wonderful. truly fantastic. i loved the part about the beast. the only thing i would change would be the 'probably not' (paragraph 5, line 2). sounds too much like you're swatting a fly. but all in all... mind-blowing.
11/26/2004 c1 melody mama
Wow, that is so beautiful. You're an amazing writer. And I'm not exaggerating. You describe things so well. And keep on fighting girl. I have faith in you.
11/25/2004 c1 79deepdown
shit... now theres powerful writing for you. its like youve opened a window into your head, your thoughts, your soul... everything about this is electric with emotion, it is simply... i dont know you word for it. a demonstration of your mastery over words, for one thing. a demonstration of your intimacy with your emotions, for another. both are rare and special.

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