for Vira12/12/2004 c1 
4Arzachel
Wow. That was AMAZING. Every single line rhymed while still conveying your meaning perfectly, and you used language that isn't often used, which gave your poem a nice flavor. I urge you: keep it up!
4ArzachelWow. That was AMAZING. Every single line rhymed while still conveying your meaning perfectly, and you used language that isn't often used, which gave your poem a nice flavor. I urge you: keep it up!
12/1/2004 c1 1Spiritfire and Shazaam Onatopp
Oh that is cool it paints a nice picture! Thanks for the review (this is Shazaam) :)
1Spiritfire and Shazaam OnatoppOh that is cool it paints a nice picture! Thanks for the review (this is Shazaam) :)
11/25/2004 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Fascinating, truly fascinating.Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietFascinating, truly fascinating.Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.