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3/23/2005 c1 scary-russian69
Sad thats all i am gonna say... gawsh
11/26/2004 c1 27doowopbop
Aww. that's sad. It made my heart hurt! Great job.

thanx for ur review on my poem

~*Veronique*~
11/25/2004 c1 243Manuel Fajar
There's several haikus and rengas in this piece. Clear crisp descriptions and emotions. m

Lonely road to town,Crushed pink blossoms muddied drown—Faltering my heart.

Rain drops sakura(Rain-drops, sakura)Pained heart as dry Sahara,Blizzard blinded love.

I'll post a renga (a series of linked haikus) in a bit.
11/25/2004 c1 someone
It was really good, but sad.

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