
11/26/2004 c1
27doowopbop
Aww. that's sad. It made my heart hurt! Great job.
thanx for ur review on my poem
~*Veronique*~

Aww. that's sad. It made my heart hurt! Great job.
thanx for ur review on my poem
~*Veronique*~
11/25/2004 c1
243Manuel Fajar
There's several haikus and rengas in this piece. Clear crisp descriptions and emotions. m
Lonely road to town,Crushed pink blossoms muddied drown—Faltering my heart.
Rain drops sakura(Rain-drops, sakura)Pained heart as dry Sahara,Blizzard blinded love.
I'll post a renga (a series of linked haikus) in a bit.

There's several haikus and rengas in this piece. Clear crisp descriptions and emotions. m
Lonely road to town,Crushed pink blossoms muddied drown—Faltering my heart.
Rain drops sakura(Rain-drops, sakura)Pained heart as dry Sahara,Blizzard blinded love.
I'll post a renga (a series of linked haikus) in a bit.
11/25/2004 c1 someone
It was really good, but sad.
It was really good, but sad.