for If only you knew7/5/2005 c9 
4Image of the Invisible
sorry dear, i just found the time to read it all now. wow. you did finish it! lol. good work cris! (=
4Image of the Invisiblesorry dear, i just found the time to read it all now. wow. you did finish it! lol. good work cris! (=
4/1/2005 c9 3topsecret32
wah! *cry cry* its so simple... and yet im so inlove with it! omg...wow...*sniff* its so short, but practically every chapter i cried u know! ur so good wit words...*sniff* now look wat u made me do! amm my tissues are finished...*stares at the pile of tissue on d floor..erlack*
3topsecret32wah! *cry cry* its so simple... and yet im so inlove with it! omg...wow...*sniff* its so short, but practically every chapter i cried u know! ur so good wit words...*sniff* now look wat u made me do! amm my tissues are finished...*stares at the pile of tissue on d floor..erlack*
3/27/2005 c9 Amanda Michelle
wow...what a great story! its lyk the first one i've read in lyk ever that had a happy ending! lol I loved it! Great job!
wow...what a great story! its lyk the first one i've read in lyk ever that had a happy ending! lol I loved it! Great job!
3/27/2005 c9 LcT514
i like it ! ahhahaha sorry about the name thing drake and jake...they sound alike. is this the end ? isthere going to be an epilogue?
i like it ! ahhahaha sorry about the name thing drake and jake...they sound alike. is this the end ? isthere going to be an epilogue?
3/26/2005 c9 25raniaur
No! That was perfect. And I loved it. You know it would be cool if you wrote a sequel *smiles thoughtfully* but that's your choice of course. :D
25raniaurNo! That was perfect. And I loved it. You know it would be cool if you wrote a sequel *smiles thoughtfully* but that's your choice of course. :D
3/26/2005 c9 23Nut
nice ending. i'm glad she went with drake in the end! really great story, awesome work.
23Nutnice ending. i'm glad she went with drake in the end! really great story, awesome work.
3/25/2005 c8 Nut
this chapter was really well written. and yes, i'll check out some of your other stuff as soon as i can. great work!
this chapter was really well written. and yes, i'll check out some of your other stuff as soon as i can. great work!
3/24/2005 c8 25raniaur
Hmm. No, I don't think you are going too fast here. But I feel so sorry for Kris. She's in the middle, and doesn't know what to do. :( Oh, and from this point I'd take it a bit slowly. Of course that's my opinion. But you can do as you like. :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
25raniaurHmm. No, I don't think you are going too fast here. But I feel so sorry for Kris. She's in the middle, and doesn't know what to do. :( Oh, and from this point I'd take it a bit slowly. Of course that's my opinion. But you can do as you like. :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
3/22/2005 c7 raniaur
I liked the revised chapter better. And this is a great chapter as well! :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
I liked the revised chapter better. And this is a great chapter as well! :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
3/22/2005 c7 23Nut
nice. that was really good. i hate cliffhangers, but that was a great way to end the chapter. and as for the revised chapter 6, you improved it a lot. it's fantastic. you're a great writer, keep it up!
23Nutnice. that was really good. i hate cliffhangers, but that was a great way to end the chapter. and as for the revised chapter 6, you improved it a lot. it's fantastic. you're a great writer, keep it up!
3/21/2005 c7 Emilea
AAH! no! dont just STOP there. neway. heh. we both write sorta short chappies. i am gan leave mi story unupdated for longer but i will write long chappies so readers do not feel dissatisfied or cheated or nething like that. wow. i have 18 reviews.
i feel so uber-li great and superbli warm. heh. neway. i hav heaps of hw to do. argh. neway. i like ur story a LOT so keep up da gewd work. ur so in mi author alert fingi! so keep writing and mebbe write longer chappies. i dno. jst a thought. heh. mwah!
babe anjwl.x
AAH! no! dont just STOP there. neway. heh. we both write sorta short chappies. i am gan leave mi story unupdated for longer but i will write long chappies so readers do not feel dissatisfied or cheated or nething like that. wow. i have 18 reviews.
i feel so uber-li great and superbli warm. heh. neway. i hav heaps of hw to do. argh. neway. i like ur story a LOT so keep up da gewd work. ur so in mi author alert fingi! so keep writing and mebbe write longer chappies. i dno. jst a thought. heh. mwah!
babe anjwl.x
3/20/2005 c6 Emilea
ok. it is a lil dramatic. u cud get lots more chappies out of this story if u kind slow things down a bit and don't kinda make things so RUSHED. this is a great idea and everything jst dun let it be so BOOM and then BAM. heh.
update soon i like your ideas in this story. cud u plz read mi storee? its called Miss self sufficient. i just started. its got a prologue and a chappie. heh. and make ur chappies a lil longer too kkz? keep up da awesome work. btw, plz review me 2!
babe anjwl.x
ok. it is a lil dramatic. u cud get lots more chappies out of this story if u kind slow things down a bit and don't kinda make things so RUSHED. this is a great idea and everything jst dun let it be so BOOM and then BAM. heh.
update soon i like your ideas in this story. cud u plz read mi storee? its called Miss self sufficient. i just started. its got a prologue and a chappie. heh. and make ur chappies a lil longer too kkz? keep up da awesome work. btw, plz review me 2!
babe anjwl.x