for If only you knew3/19/2005 c6 
4Image of the Invisible
lupit tsong. can't wait for next. it was pretty cool, although a little cliche. but nice, nonetheless. keep updating.
4Image of the Invisiblelupit tsong. can't wait for next. it was pretty cool, although a little cliche. but nice, nonetheless. keep updating.
3/13/2005 c6 23Nut
i really like this story. i find the way that drake tells kris that he loves her to be kind of abrupt though. and you said that "From afar a figure appeared, shock and disbelief written all over his face." but then nathan appeared right next to drake and kris in like a second. and for the previous chapters, i think that if you ever come back over to edit this story, then you should maybe make it slightly more clear that kris cut herself. but i liked the way that you make her seem all happy at school and then she turns out to be a cutter and suicidal in her own personal life, because that's how it usually is. this is a REALLY awesome story and i hope you update really soon. the only suggestion that i have is to make the chapters slightly longer, but apart from that, everything's awesome. great work!
23Nuti really like this story. i find the way that drake tells kris that he loves her to be kind of abrupt though. and you said that "From afar a figure appeared, shock and disbelief written all over his face." but then nathan appeared right next to drake and kris in like a second. and for the previous chapters, i think that if you ever come back over to edit this story, then you should maybe make it slightly more clear that kris cut herself. but i liked the way that you make her seem all happy at school and then she turns out to be a cutter and suicidal in her own personal life, because that's how it usually is. this is a REALLY awesome story and i hope you update really soon. the only suggestion that i have is to make the chapters slightly longer, but apart from that, everything's awesome. great work!
3/13/2005 c6 25raniaur
Hmm. I'd say he gave up the confession a little too fast. I'd add one or two more protests and stallings if I were you. Other then that, cool, good chapter. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
25raniaurHmm. I'd say he gave up the confession a little too fast. I'd add one or two more protests and stallings if I were you. Other then that, cool, good chapter. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
3/7/2005 c5 Butterfli-kiss
Aw! That is so sad! I can't believe it. Does she and Drake ever get together? Keep up the great work though. Your writing is terrific. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Aw! That is so sad! I can't believe it. Does she and Drake ever get together? Keep up the great work though. Your writing is terrific. I can't wait for the next chapter!
2/20/2005 c5 1Humor Me Pink
Good stuff. I really like it. Awesome plot... a little more detail wouldnt hurt. Also, if you made the chapters longer, things would be more interesting. :)
lu
1Humor Me PinkGood stuff. I really like it. Awesome plot... a little more detail wouldnt hurt. Also, if you made the chapters longer, things would be more interesting. :)
lu
2/19/2005 c5 4Image of the Invisible
dude...it's so sad! hahha now i get it...spoiler kasi eh...pero i lurved it shitloads.! (=
4Image of the Invisibledude...it's so sad! hahha now i get it...spoiler kasi eh...pero i lurved it shitloads.! (=
2/19/2005 c5 3youspinme99
this is really sad...my heart is out to Drake: he shouldn't have been a player though...well it's really good, and on my favorite stories, please continue...
3youspinme99this is really sad...my heart is out to Drake: he shouldn't have been a player though...well it's really good, and on my favorite stories, please continue...
2/19/2005 c5 lostinmydreams
Wow! This is really good and extremely sad but in a good way of course! Keep Writing
Wow! This is really good and extremely sad but in a good way of course! Keep Writing
2/19/2005 c5 2bookqueen
WOW..this is really good I hope that in the end she chooses Drake though keep up the great work and update soon!
2bookqueenWOW..this is really good I hope that in the end she chooses Drake though keep up the great work and update soon!
2/19/2005 c5 messy
o no.. drake's all left out!
o no.. drake's all left out!