12/15/2004 c3 Coma99
AH cliff hanger. PLEASE update. When you said "lose her" in the title I thought you meant like to Nathan not to death! I like it. MAKE YOUR CHAPTERS LONGER PLEASE!
AH cliff hanger. PLEASE update. When you said "lose her" in the title I thought you meant like to Nathan not to death! I like it. MAKE YOUR CHAPTERS LONGER PLEASE!
12/15/2004 c3 Butterfli-kiss
I love your story. It is so awesome. I can really understand Drake with the whole liking your best friend thing. I hope you update the chapter really soon. I can't wait to see what's wrong with Kris! My only advice is to maybe do Kris's point of view in one of the chapters. Keep up the great work!
I love your story. It is so awesome. I can really understand Drake with the whole liking your best friend thing. I hope you update the chapter really soon. I can't wait to see what's wrong with Kris! My only advice is to maybe do Kris's point of view in one of the chapters. Keep up the great work!
12/15/2004 c3 9double-life
Oh my god! I love it! Please, please, please continue and write another chapter soon!
Oh my god! I love it! Please, please, please continue and write another chapter soon!
12/15/2004 c3 2No Life
wait . . . what happened . . . why'd you leave me hangin, o by the way great story so far, I love it I hope you update real soon.
wait . . . what happened . . . why'd you leave me hangin, o by the way great story so far, I love it I hope you update real soon.
12/15/2004 c3 7Esteban T. Rodriguez
Gee! I know just how this Drake fellow feels. (I've got feelings for this one girl in my math class. She looks just like Paris Hilton, only with black hair. GEEZ!) Anyway, nice cliffy. Update soon please. Ciao!-Esteban T. Rodriguez
Gee! I know just how this Drake fellow feels. (I've got feelings for this one girl in my math class. She looks just like Paris Hilton, only with black hair. GEEZ!) Anyway, nice cliffy. Update soon please. Ciao!-Esteban T. Rodriguez
12/1/2004 c2 2Pundit
Cute ^_^ My only criticism (and it's a really a small thing): You mention their names a bit much in the dialogue. I can go for DAYS without actually saying anyone's name (which is *very* helpful since I'm bad at remembering names... like REALLY bad at it) I really like the idea though. Can't wait to see where you take it!
Cute ^_^ My only criticism (and it's a really a small thing): You mention their names a bit much in the dialogue. I can go for DAYS without actually saying anyone's name (which is *very* helpful since I'm bad at remembering names... like REALLY bad at it) I really like the idea though. Can't wait to see where you take it!
11/27/2004 c1 13through these jaded eyes
aw this is happening with me and my best guy friend! so sad isntit ?
aw this is happening with me and my best guy friend! so sad isntit ?