for We Both Reached For the Gun5/30/2008 c1 
18the.vulture
I know it's been a while since this was written, but whatever. This is a really good story, very well written and action-packed!
18the.vultureI know it's been a while since this was written, but whatever. This is a really good story, very well written and action-packed!
2/17/2006 c1 48Vyvyan
An interesting story. I look forward to more. (Thank you for the review)
Also, about the woman-hood question...erm...well. If you're going technical, then I suppose whenever the girl hits puberty. But I'm nineteen and have only started to really feel like an actual woman, even though I've long since hit puberty.
That is all.
48VyvyanAn interesting story. I look forward to more. (Thank you for the review)
Also, about the woman-hood question...erm...well. If you're going technical, then I suppose whenever the girl hits puberty. But I'm nineteen and have only started to really feel like an actual woman, even though I've long since hit puberty.
That is all.
1/18/2006 c1 4run rabbit run
hey. thanks for the reviews. it's nice to know someone likes the utter crap i write. i am a very chaotic person when i write, so it comes out that way easily.i've never been one for conformaty so your use of words intrigues me and delights me. you got a knack. i see potential. cultivate it, man. good luck.
4run rabbit runhey. thanks for the reviews. it's nice to know someone likes the utter crap i write. i am a very chaotic person when i write, so it comes out that way easily.i've never been one for conformaty so your use of words intrigues me and delights me. you got a knack. i see potential. cultivate it, man. good luck.
1/3/2006 c1 3ThePrue
This was a great story. I personaly enjoy the character, and how life-like you made him.
3ThePrueThis was a great story. I personaly enjoy the character, and how life-like you made him.
12/6/2005 c1 18Pixie-Twix
You know, ya`ll have me flattered. Two awsome writters before you reviewed my story, and i was like 'wow, they like my stuff' and now you review after writting THIS? i`m gonna get so full of myself there will be no living with me! i love this story! the plot, the whole concept, the fact that even though you don`t know waht`s going on...you do. this was great and i hope you write more of it! thanks for your review! i should be updating soon, have the next xhappie planned out already^_^ and the story is going into a romance...but ya might have already figured that out.
18Pixie-TwixYou know, ya`ll have me flattered. Two awsome writters before you reviewed my story, and i was like 'wow, they like my stuff' and now you review after writting THIS? i`m gonna get so full of myself there will be no living with me! i love this story! the plot, the whole concept, the fact that even though you don`t know waht`s going on...you do. this was great and i hope you write more of it! thanks for your review! i should be updating soon, have the next xhappie planned out already^_^ and the story is going into a romance...but ya might have already figured that out.
5/19/2005 c1 36Sita Fuoco
Absolutely wonderful... I love these kind of stories... morbidly descriptive, and even though it was a bit frightening, deffinately a great read. Awesome job. i wish you'd post more of your writing... because id love to read more. Okay well yeah nice job! *~Sita
36Sita FuocoAbsolutely wonderful... I love these kind of stories... morbidly descriptive, and even though it was a bit frightening, deffinately a great read. Awesome job. i wish you'd post more of your writing... because id love to read more. Okay well yeah nice job! *~Sita
4/27/2005 c1 12Arrow's Flight
This is quite gripping. . . poor guy. Er. . . actually maybe not. What's going to happen to him?
Thank you so much for adding me to your favorite author's list.
-Arrow's flight-
12Arrow's FlightThis is quite gripping. . . poor guy. Er. . . actually maybe not. What's going to happen to him?
Thank you so much for adding me to your favorite author's list.
-Arrow's flight-
12/19/2004 c1 aknightsgoldenrose
Nice descriptions. I noticed a few mistakes here and there but nothing major. Keep up the great work.
Nice descriptions. I noticed a few mistakes here and there but nothing major. Keep up the great work.
12/16/2004 c1 10DrunkenMonkeyKing
Very nice. Great opening, a great feel for the character, some very good action, you definitely got a good thing going here.
The one thing I could tell you to watch out for is to try and get your grammar a touch better. Like I said, you got some great writing in here and I'd hate to see someone ignore it just because they wrote you off for bad grammar.
10DrunkenMonkeyKingVery nice. Great opening, a great feel for the character, some very good action, you definitely got a good thing going here.
The one thing I could tell you to watch out for is to try and get your grammar a touch better. Like I said, you got some great writing in here and I'd hate to see someone ignore it just because they wrote you off for bad grammar.
11/30/2004 c1 fran
Oh yes oh yes oh yes we both oh yes we both oh yes we both reached for the gun the gun the gun the gun oh yes we both reached for the gun for the gun! woo
Oh yes oh yes oh yes we both oh yes we both oh yes we both reached for the gun the gun the gun the gun oh yes we both reached for the gun for the gun! woo
11/27/2004 c1 4Silver Chaos
Wow! The descriptions were really good, and I liked how you kept questioning! I would complain that it's too short, but there doesn't seem to be any need to explain. You just leave it to the imagination. Very good!
4Silver ChaosWow! The descriptions were really good, and I liked how you kept questioning! I would complain that it's too short, but there doesn't seem to be any need to explain. You just leave it to the imagination. Very good!