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12/31/2005 c1 5horrible writer
Not exactly a favorite, but there's one part that stands out: "be each passing moment" I like the perspective you give, the back and forth of some sort between you and your friend- if you are I am kind of thing. One thing that annoyed me was the use of "u". Not exactly poetic. Also, you didn't capitalize your i's, although I could assume you did that on purpose. Maybe you could describe more the two friends- not just the relationship between them. However, all in all, a nice job.
1/19/2001 c1 Woodie
hey- is this T.C?

..this is a good poem. :)

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1/14/2001 c1 21Snow Queen
That is a very powerful poem! Good job!
1/14/2001 c1 8Whoopdido
a little cheesey i know! i am sorry it isnt vey good

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