for The Hidden Rose4/29/2021 c1 lloyd388
The author is so talented, you can publish it on NôvelStar Mobile App and earn time big time.
The author is so talented, you can publish it on NôvelStar Mobile App and earn time big time.
12/30/2004 c1 Tempergurl
Good so far. Keep going, also in some spots the story is in 2nd person and in other's it is in 1st. Try and choose which one you want. But otherwise i really like it, it has humor which is AWSOME!
Good so far. Keep going, also in some spots the story is in 2nd person and in other's it is in 1st. Try and choose which one you want. But otherwise i really like it, it has humor which is AWSOME!
12/20/2004 c1 
10sugarplumfairie
This is very good! I can see what is going on in this chapter very clearly, and I find it easy to picture the western 'feel' to it as well. Overall a good job. Thank you for reviewing my work some while ago...it is much appreciated.
Toodles
sugarplumfairie
10sugarplumfairieThis is very good! I can see what is going on in this chapter very clearly, and I find it easy to picture the western 'feel' to it as well. Overall a good job. Thank you for reviewing my work some while ago...it is much appreciated.
Toodles
sugarplumfairie
12/2/2004 c1 2MageDay
I usually don't read western, but I just saw "Dances With Wolves" at school and I dunno - your story's summary just caught my interest. U going to continue?
2MageDayI usually don't read western, but I just saw "Dances With Wolves" at school and I dunno - your story's summary just caught my interest. U going to continue?
12/2/2004 c1 1x-TheSmallPrint-x
hey! It's a cool beginning so far... continue the story, the summery sounds really good, and I want to see how it turns out!
And thank you for reviewing my story!
1x-TheSmallPrint-xhey! It's a cool beginning so far... continue the story, the summery sounds really good, and I want to see how it turns out!
And thank you for reviewing my story!
12/1/2004 c1 6QueenSavvy
This is a great story so far. You should continue it! Oh yeah and thanks for reading and reviewing my story. That was really nice. Anyway update this one really soon okay!
6QueenSavvyThis is a great story so far. You should continue it! Oh yeah and thanks for reading and reviewing my story. That was really nice. Anyway update this one really soon okay!